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情思三叶
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PostPosted: 2007-05-19 16:50:16    Post subject: 情思三叶 Reply with quote

情思三叶

1 一株行走的草

别人说
我冬天是虫
夏天是草
我辩解说
我不是冬虫夏草

我只站在原地
淡淡的呼吸
春不为百花盛开而喜
夏不为鸳鸯戏水而动
秋不为枫红桔黄而荣
冬不为雪花凋零而泣

可邱比特的剑没长眼睛
把我这颗寂静的草射中
于是我爱上了灯火斑斓
爱上了南岭北岳
爱上了鱼游海帆
爱上了云海蓝天
爱上了空中飞燕

于是我繁衍出多套五官
我嗅到了馨香缭绕
我听到了燕子昵喃
我领悟了心灵的梵语
我听到了心底的呼唤
我看见激情的灵魂
在瀑布间飞溅

我收集你的凝眸一点点一点点
我会意你的暗示一遍遍一遍遍
我聚焦你的轻叹一夜夜一夜夜
我咀嚼你的真情一天天一天天

一株行走的草
抖落身上的羁绊
踩着烟波浩淼
赴三千繁华彼岸
与飞渡的云朵
手牵着手情牵着千

2 梅边吹笛

一种漫无边际的风飞过
仿佛置身于迷雾中
紧接着由笛声的引导
找到了方向
灵动富有节奏的乐曲开始
进入了冰雪花开的世界
流淌的旋律
逐渐开朗了郁积已久的蓓蕾

曾经
花不再盛开
水不再淙淙
瘦硬的河床
从心底露出
剜心撕肺的尖石
划碎心的涟漪

如今
听着笛声诉说着古老的传说
静静的 静静的 享受着
起舞 在花和雪的世界
随风而动
漂到希望之地
那是理想的家园

心装在多元化的载体里
一种异样
一种颤动
一种放松
一种结束
一种开始

你深情的凝望
从笛声的游曳里穿过
清澈的眼眸
投影我含蓄的绽放
收藏淡淡馨香
任栉风沐雨
亦掩盖不住悠悠飘荡

当春天的第一屡笛音
穿过心脏
我会伸出丝绸般柔软的枝蔓
抚摸你温柔的眼光

3 梧桐春雨

你身着紫色纱裙
飘着淡淡的梧桐花香
与我意外的重逢
在雨中

振动的雨丝
弹着高山流水
奏着春江花月夜

律动的音符
穿过血管壁
与脉动的血液
添满心的千沟万壑

看似平静的心河呀
却翻滚着满眼的绿波
那蕴含的特殊讯号
使我的神经朝气蓬勃

晶莹在诉说
朦胧在闪烁
不知是万家灯火
抑或是星光朵朵

终于嗅到了你的气息
我惊诧你变化
如此彻底

梧桐叶片将雨丝
梳理成柔曼曲调
醉了思绪
乱了心里

仍静坐
轻薄的羽翼
自窗口飘进来
颤动的记忆
打碎一笛月光

空气被感动着
沁透了思想
化作两只海鸥
追波逐浪
自由翱翔



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PostPosted: 2007-05-19 17:13:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

你应该是写散文诗的好手
Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-05-19 17:19:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
你应该是写散文诗的好手
Very Happy


谢谢夸奖。 Very Happy 这几首是以抒情为主。
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PostPosted: 2007-05-19 18:40:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

写成散文诗效果会好些,个见,握手.
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