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《读懂》

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赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
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Posted: 2007-05-18 06:16:09 Post subject: 《读懂》

《读懂》今天，说过就过的是风，和希冀看到的盼望我知道，困是放不下的扰灯盏燃起，谁于半明半暗中，和着泪心伤本来不是云和蓝天，翘首的日子却张开眼中的帆，任两个月字写满视线。给我一根过眼的线吧让烟蒙胧，席地而起的楚酸这是冬季，坐在一轮弯月里我写着，只有自己读懂的文字暗自怆然

冷巉
举人

Joined: 10 Mar 2007
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Location: 中国十堰
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Posted: 2007-05-18 06:36:44 Post subject:

诗人的心中有首一种何等的高洁啊，忧啊，快乐起来吧~~~~~~~~~~~`` _________________ syr@shiyanren.com 冷巉湖北省十堰市茅箭区三堰邮政小区48号信箱 442000

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-05-18 18:17:26 Post subject:

冷巉 wrote:

诗人的心中有首一种何等的高洁啊，忧啊，快乐起来吧~~~~~~~~~~~``

多提意见.

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Location: TORONTO
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Posted: 2007-05-18 20:37:35 Post subject:

我写着，只有自己读懂的文字暗自沧然已是冬去春来时. 问好诗人

鲁绪刚
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Joined: 27 May 2006
Posts: 121

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Posted: 2007-05-18 22:41:32 Post subject:

灯盏燃起，谁于半明半暗中，和着泪心伤

雨木
童生

Joined: 22 Mar 2007
Posts: 30

雨木Collection

Posted: 2007-05-19 07:03:01 Post subject: Re: 《读懂》

本来不是云和蓝天，翘首的日子却张开眼中的帆，任两个月字写满视线。大气，意境悠远。欣赏。问好！

俞伟远
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Posted: 2007-05-19 07:22:42 Post subject:

这是冬季，坐在一轮弯月里一种冷峻的美.问好 _________________ 俞伟远：１９６７生，１９８７大学毕业、工作。19９０年后几乎与诗绝缘，2006年春重拾笔，感悟生活，凝望心灵，自得其乐。http://blog.sina.com.cn/txyuweiyuan

杨海军
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Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2007-05-19 12:45:43 Post subject:

灯盏燃起，谁于半明半暗中，和着泪心伤一首好诗，提读一下！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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Posted: 2007-05-19 14:03:21 Post subject:

从福治先生的语言看，精练有力，伤而不悲，怆然低亢。兄欲致力于真诗也。期待！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2007-05-19 14:05:34 Post subject:

给我一根过眼的线吧让烟蒙胧，席地而起的楚酸怎样的手写下这样的诗歌啊~~~? 一地的心情起起伏伏 _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

樱花听雨
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Posted: 2007-05-19 17:54:05 Post subject:

好酒。 _________________ 樱花听雨搜狐博客樱花听雨新浪博客

沙漠
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Posted: 2007-05-19 18:24:29 Post subject:

很有感染力的一首! _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
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Posted: 2007-05-19 18:37:10 Post subject:

大家多批评.

天淡云闲
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Joined: 24 Mar 2007
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天淡云闲Collection

Posted: 2007-05-20 16:52:03 Post subject:

问好！来读你的诗作

品玉
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Posted: 2007-05-20 20:32:32 Post subject:

拜读了!枕月独思,人更愁! _________________ 孤独的执烛者，在黑暗的水面上留下火苗的伤口～～～～～

徐业华
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Posted: 2007-05-20 20:45:45 Post subject:

本来不是云和蓝天，翘首的日子却张开眼中的帆，任两个月字写满视线。给我一根过眼的线吧让烟蒙胧，席地而起的楚酸向赵老师学习。 _________________ 只有在寒冷的冬天，我们才能接近最纯净的光芒。

子花
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子花Collection

Posted: 2007-05-21 04:12:27 Post subject:

不懂评诗！！来学习

半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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Posted: 2007-05-21 06:28:18 Post subject:

很久没看到这样快意的诗歌了,意韵深藏~问好赵老师!

赵福治
探花

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Posted: 2007-05-21 08:13:02 Post subject:

大家多批评.

溪语
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Joined: 16 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2007-05-21 15:22:05 Post subject:

和希冀看到的盼望 -----我觉得这句尚可斟酌!!问好赵兄!! _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

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