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苏醒的花朵

刘剡
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Posted: 2006-06-06 04:44:16 Post subject: 苏醒的花朵

[原创]苏醒的花朵刘剡 (中国神农架 ) 那些争艳的花朵 在森林的云端—— 烦燥不安。 她稚嫩的翅膀 一直飞翔在梦的边缘， 不敢触及岁月的胸口， 深怕羞妮的红晕 遮不住自已的芳容； 被过路的黄蜂 强奸于冲动的想象， 穿越不了梦境。 其实她把整个一生 都雕刻在森林 即是死去还是在苏醒。  电邮：snjlzy@163.com 地址：442400 湖北神农架张公路(人大新宿舍楼)

张村
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Posted: 2006-06-06 06:10:01 Post subject:

个人感觉诗歌语句之间略紧促了些. _________________ 在诗里找生活,在生活里找乐.

舒白
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Posted: 2006-06-06 06:41:18 Post subject:

我们曾经走过而又背离。。。道路，花朵，诗歌。 _________________ 尘世既没有欢乐，也没有永恒。

尹士林
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Posted: 2006-06-08 17:34:47 Post subject:

同意张村的看法。 _________________ 忧郁过、犹豫过，从未放弃过！！！！！河北易县中学尹士林

刘剡
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Posted: 2006-06-10 04:04:48 Post subject: 远握!谢了

舒白 wrote:

我们曾经走过
而又背离。。。
道路，花朵，诗歌。

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在诗里，生活比在现实本身里还显得更是生活。

刘剡
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Posted: 2006-06-28 03:39:52 Post subject: 问好！

张村 wrote:

个人感觉诗歌语句之间略紧促了些.

_________________
在诗里，生活比在现实本身里还显得更是生活。

雪泥
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Posted: 2006-06-28 06:18:12 Post subject:

请投稿到乐趣园梅园论坛，这里和北美枫没有任何联系，纯属设计上的问题。由于我们无法管理，今后不再使用该论坛。致万个歉。 _________________ 《梅园文学》总编欢迎各种体裁的投稿雪泥博客： http://xueniwriting.blog.sohu.com/

乐园成也
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Posted: 2006-06-28 07:14:32 Post subject:

提读：））问好！

张少林
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Posted: 2006-06-28 18:38:14 Post subject:

请投http://xz.netsh.com/bbs/798581/ 深表谢意。

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