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水调歌头－落花

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-05-18 00:35:07 Post subject: 水调歌头－落花

飞雨惹伤句，春别夏来时，赋诗频频怜玉，只叹别生悲。谁会空灵逝去？归隐琼园玉宇，本是此心期。何苦费忧词？且悟妙神思。当日姿，如仙遇，最狂痴。体柔怎愈？凡间已晓久难依。故而坦言飘旅，恣自抽身幽处，愁老怕无知。早做散离虑。恐独受人稀！

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Posted: 2007-05-18 16:06:12 Post subject:

世事無常，令人感慨。 _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-05-18 16:43:43 Post subject:

戴玨 wrote:

世事無常，令人感慨。

唉！是啊，謝謝點評！

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Posted: 2007-05-19 00:28:16 Post subject:

令人感慨。问好莹雪 _________________ 齐喜章(智发）智发雅居http://qxzzzzz.blog.sohu.com/

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-05-19 00:43:09 Post subject:

谢谢智发点评，再次欢迎智发光顾古韵版！问好智发

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Posted: 2007-05-23 23:12:38 Post subject: Re: 水调歌头－落花

莹雪 wrote:

飞雨惹伤句，春别夏来时，赋诗频频怜玉，只叹别生悲。

谁会空灵逝去？归隐琼园玉宇，本是此心期。

何苦费忧词？且悟妙神思。

当日姿，如仙遇，最狂痴。体柔怎愈？凡间已晓久难依。

故而坦言飘旅，恣自抽身幽处，愁老怕无知。

早做散离虑。恐独受人稀！

落花无意人有情! 问好莹雪。

布局、咏叹一波三折，情致步步舒展、深化。好词!

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-05-23 23:23:19 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

莹雪 wrote:

落花无意人有情! 问好莹雪。

布局、咏叹一波三折，情致步步舒展、深化。好词!

谢谢冰清老师鼓励！

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