勿妄言
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 Posted: 2007-05-18 19:06:31 Post subject: [原创]试和余卫国诗 |
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华色朦胧漫窗纬
白杨婆娑柳斜依
呓语甜梦深入寐
倦懒晨妆轻试泪
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余卫国和秋蔷<情丝>
星闪银河护月华，
蜀连翠岭抱三峡。
情眠夏雾旌城景，
笑捧秋蔷桂地花。
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晓松
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| Posted: 2007-05-18 19:37:21 Post subject: |
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拜读。问好！
朋友，何不试着依原韵“华”、“峡”、“花”来和一首？ |
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勿妄言
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| Posted: 2007-05-19 04:11:43 Post subject: |
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拜读。问好！
朋友，何不试着依原韵“华”、“峡”、“花”来和一首？ |
正在挖空心思呢。作业越来越难做了，郁闷中。
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暗香如沁
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kokho
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| Posted: 2007-05-20 09:40:22 Post subject: |
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唱和得好 羡慕。。。
 
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