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《出走》唱酬集

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含昕
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Posted: 2007-05-17 08:56:51 Post subject:

KOKHO,我是含昕. 含昕的ID好像还是用不了,呵呵.干脆换一个名字上来了.

kokho
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Posted: 2007-05-17 09:38:33 Post subject:

品玉 wrote:

祝君诗酬之路象春花一样开放溢香!!!!!!!!!!

谢谢　品玉　也来和诗　 Cool

现在我专注　北美枫　

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冷巉
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Posted: 2007-05-18 17:25:40 Post subject:

欣赏啊~~````````` _________________ syr@shiyanren.com 冷巉湖北省十堰市茅箭区三堰邮政小区48号信箱 442000

一言
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Posted: 2007-05-19 05:25:44 Post subject:

这是歌还是诗，不过还不错，看起来舒服。 _________________ 我是个平凡的人，但我喜欢在平凡的日子里做不平凡的事情，每个人都可以这么来作去认为自己的存在。

海阔舟不系
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Posted: 2007-05-19 08:35:30 Post subject:

欣赏！！！ _________________ 天海阔舟不系与我心共风飞不系的茅屋：http://djy-901844.blog.163.com/edit/

kokho
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Posted: 2007-05-20 09:32:39 Post subject:

冷巉 wrote:

欣赏啊~~`````````

谢谢　抬爱。。。

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kokho
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Posted: 2007-05-20 09:33:33 Post subject:

一言 wrote:

这是歌还是诗，不过还不错，看起来舒服。

只要你欣赏　是什么都不重要

。。 Cool

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kokho
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Posted: 2007-05-20 09:34:05 Post subject:

海阔舟不系 wrote:

欣赏！！！

谢谢。。。

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荷梦
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Posted: 2007-05-22 06:06:19 Post subject:

欣赏了！

kokho
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Posted: 2007-05-22 21:02:45 Post subject:

含昕 wrote:

KOKHO,我是含昕.

含昕的ID好像还是用不了,呵呵.干脆换一个名字上来了.

看到你回家了。。。很是高兴！！

Cool

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kokho
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Posted: 2007-05-22 21:03:22 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

欣赏了！

你终于来了。。。：）

Cool

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荷梦
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Posted: 2007-05-23 05:03:43 Post subject:

终于？不好意思，最近不怎么上网了。我粗粗地看了那些和诗，感觉与你原诗在意思的表达上还是有很大出入的。也许各人的理解不同，从你诗中我所读到，是一位走过人世沧桑的心漾起了春的涟漪，试图冲破现实中的藩篱，来一次甜蜜的出走。尽管已近黄昏，困难重重，但心头的信念却愈挫愈坚，诗也越写越甜蜜，呵呵，最后一起牵手出走。妄解了！见笑！

kokho
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Posted: 2007-05-23 23:34:41 Post subject:

给　荷梦　回好　你要多上来哟。。。如果你点击　动画首页，你就会近到目录业面。。。在目录业面，背景不断循环的３张图片，就是我写的文字的主要形象。当时，所有和诗的朋友们，都看到３张图和听到那首音乐。。。《》谢谢你的详尽解读。。。　你说的只是　个在现实中不可能存在的梦想！！． _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

品玉
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Posted: 2007-05-24 01:02:48 Post subject:

图文并貌!优美诗话!让人赏心阅目! _________________ 孤独的执烛者，在黑暗的水面上留下火苗的伤口～～～～～

kokho
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Posted: 2007-05-28 11:44:55 Post subject:

品玉 wrote:

图文并貌!优美诗话!让人赏心阅目! drum

谢谢品玉。。。

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