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初夏的妄语外二
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PostPosted: 2007-05-18 15:42:11    Post subject: 初夏的妄语外二 Reply with quote

初夏的妄语

蜘蛛。做梦的蜘蛛
四处散布谣言的蜘蛛
天空因此变得琐碎。

远山落入迷茫
无边无际的陷阱。
田野上蚱蜢,蝈蝈
在网格上跳跃。

大地张开血盆大口,吞掉一切
给我们一个宁静的夜晚。

1988

沿着两条钢轨
那个喘粗气的人
喉咙里发出奇怪的声响。
雷雨遮起面孔
灰色的云
一直延伸到天边。
触摸到尽头
一根根电线杆
电线上挂满鸟屎
他看不见。

火车

1988年.列车驶过
一块石头的隧道。
花岗岩。内心的坚硬
一闪而过的念头。
车窗,熟悉的面孔
穿越身体旅行的人
他的黑皮包里面
镜子。木偶。红头绳。
一只折断多年的牙刷
始终不说话。
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PostPosted: 2007-05-18 16:10:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

有质感

一根根电线杆
上面挂满鸟屎
他看不见。
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PostPosted: 2007-05-18 16:17:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

有深意。
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PostPosted: 2007-05-18 22:31:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

感觉很好,欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-19 14:23:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
有质感

一根根电线杆
上面挂满鸟屎
他看不见。

谢谢 Smile 改了几个字.
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