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七月将别
肖今
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Joined: 26 May 2006
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PostPosted: 2006-06-26 00:31:03    Post subject: 七月将别 Reply with quote

我不别你你也要别我
这是七月的命令
如雨降临

与往常不同的是
这一次别离
我们的天一片晴朗
可谓梅雨之后第一个明媚的艳阳天
再次燃烧起湿漉漉的草堆

远足是你等待的结束
那座陌生的美丽的城市
已在我梦里向你召唤
命运之神终于打开了另一头大门
从此你将踏上新的征程
而我是你树上的一片叶子
或者是一枚枝杆

你将要走在边境小路
那样的夜一定会很绵长
这些年被我的顽皮弄丢了大好时光
如果上帝能赦免一切的过去
请带我回到原始森林
也许只有那古朴的莽绿
才能驱走久居灵魂的恶魔
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雪泥
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Joined: 26 May 2006
Posts: 255
Location: 西欧
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PostPosted: 2006-06-26 00:40:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

好诗 Smile
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张少林
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Joined: 21 Jun 2006
Posts: 89

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PostPosted: 2006-06-26 00:48:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

返璞归真,回归自然。学习,问好。
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尹士林
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Location: 河北保定易县中学
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PostPosted: 2006-06-26 00:55:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

还望不吝赐教!
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刘剡
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Joined: 06 Jun 2006
Posts: 58
Location: 中国神农架
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PostPosted: 2006-06-26 23:01:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好。
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乐园成也
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PostPosted: 2006-06-27 05:58:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

提读:))问好肖今,辛苦了!
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剑熔
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PostPosted: 2006-06-27 15:32:52    Post subject: 学习老朋友的诗歌! Reply with quote

的确不错!
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