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关于酒吧,和你

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2007-04-29 22:35:17 Post subject: 关于酒吧,和你

关于酒吧,和你那个酒吧门口废弃的木桶谁遗落的花瓣眼角的风景没有阻挡我，推门而入浓妆的她在不远处把寂寞放在桌上你，冷冷点燃香烟审视现在，优雅地踢开过去酒杯在你手中一样冰凉时间碾过时间扁扁的没有了内容留下的片断和外婆的故事相去甚远握着酒杯，凝视萧声尽处一个人陪我老了容颜黄昏，酒杯的温度恰到好处想和你对酒当歌，醉拥长街 _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

kokho
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Posted: 2007-04-29 23:49:15 Post subject: Re: 关于酒吧,和你

阿依琼裙 wrote:

关于酒吧,和你

那个酒吧
门口废弃的木桶
谁遗落的花瓣
眼角的风景没有阻挡
我，推门而入

浓妆的她在不远处
把寂寞放在桌上
你，冷冷点燃香烟
审视现在，优雅地踢开过去
酒杯在你手中
一样冰凉

时间碾过时间
扁扁的没有了内容
留下的片断
和外婆的故事相去甚远
握着酒杯，凝视
萧声尽处
一个人陪我老了容颜

黄昏，酒杯的温度恰到好处
想和你
对酒当歌，醉拥长街

一种浓厚的酒吧文化

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乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-04-30 01:28:03 Post subject:

不错，问候小米妹妹。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-04-30 01:29:58 Post subject:

萧声尽处一个人陪我老了容颜想和你对酒当歌，醉拥长街惆怅的情绪。时间碾过时间，扁扁的没了内容 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2007-04-30 23:48:34 Post subject:

问好kokho,海军,少君~~! _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2007-05-01 17:44:16 Post subject:

信手拈来均为诗, 自然, 清新

冷水
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Posted: 2007-05-01 22:49:43 Post subject:

应当说叙述与抒情结合的好． _________________ 越来越蠢

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Posted: 2007-05-02 03:13:06 Post subject:

黄昏，酒杯的温度恰到好处想和你对酒当歌，醉拥长街 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-05-03 20:24:33 Post subject:

被遮了光的光怪陆离。问好 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2007-05-03 23:45:48 Post subject:

黄昏，酒杯的温度恰到好处诗的温度也恰到好处.问好 _________________ 俞伟远：１９６７生，１９８７大学毕业、工作。19９０年后几乎与诗绝缘，2006年春重拾笔，感悟生活，凝望心灵，自得其乐。http://blog.sina.com.cn/txyuweiyuan

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Posted: 2007-05-04 02:05:03 Post subject:

改天我也到国内的酒吧，看看能蹦出什么句子。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2007-05-17 01:09:07 Post subject:

问好朋友们~~ 引用:改天我也到国内的酒吧，看看能蹦出什么句子。欢迎,欢迎回来~~~ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2007-05-17 02:17:53 Post subject:

对酒当歌,是种幸福! _________________ 孤独的执烛者，在黑暗的水面上留下火苗的伤口～～～～～

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