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{原创}一丈之外
品玉
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PostPosted: 2007-05-14 00:50:51    Post subject: {原创}一丈之外 Reply with quote

一丈之外
消失所有的喜怒哀乐
从背影看到的
一干二净
熟悉与陌生
一张脸转过的瞬间
自言自语

一丈之外
冷漠的缺少体温
克隆的仍然是正副零的度数
很近,也很远
距离把灵魂从肉体分割
一丈之外是另外一种现象
一丈之外上演逃犯的恐慌
一丈之外市井鼎沸的意图
一丈之内枷锁重重
一丈之外的承诺
一封被遗忘的情书
在尘埃中死去
埋葬在背影瞬间的迷雾里
一丈之内的光芒
被一丈之外的鸟语
取而代之

2007.5.14
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2007-05-14 01:47:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

一丈之内的光芒
被一丈之外的鸟语
取而代之
woaaaaaa
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PostPosted: 2007-05-14 01:53:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢 这种后现代的感觉。。。


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品玉
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PostPosted: 2007-05-14 04:54:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

少军 kokho 感谢你们的关注!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-14 17:40:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

一丈之外
诗人留下了思索. 问好
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PostPosted: 2007-05-14 18:09:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

好诗!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-14 23:37:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢白水!谢谢海军! victory
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PostPosted: 2007-05-15 00:27:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

一丈之外
固然不能左右
却也不会或不许
混淆一丈之内
所有的视觉
和感悟

呵呵~~ 问好:))
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PostPosted: 2007-05-15 00:47:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

很好,高源很精点的阐述!谢谢!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-20 19:54:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

昨天得知<一丈之外>在<北美枫>第三期发表,品玉非常高兴!
在此也非常感谢支持品玉的的各位朋友! drum cheers
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