天淡云闲
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 Posted: 2007-05-13 17:35:50 Post subject: 写在《海上风》两周年 |
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写在《海上风》两周年
桅杆
上扬的明媚
吹开万紫千红
我伸出双手
把赶海者的疲倦橹进酒杯
月光满窗
浸透海上风
别再虚构桃花源
这里花明柳绿
方言开在岁月的枝头
以倾听的姿势
靠近低小房檐
无法抵挡
生命的力量
稚气在这里成长
夜来香徐徐绽放 |
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2007-05-13 17:45:07 Post subject: |
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清新
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为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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龙飞
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| Posted: 2007-05-13 19:07:10 Post subject: |
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是啊，清新明快，有章有句！
提倡这种风格！ |
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天淡云闲
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| Posted: 2007-05-15 04:21:27 Post subject: |
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问好和平岛！真想听你直言不足啊！ |
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天淡云闲
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| Posted: 2007-05-15 04:25:03 Post subject: |
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| 龙飞 wrote: |
是啊，清新明快，有章有句！
提倡这种风格！ |
问好朋友！谢鼓励！希望指点不足 |
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