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我青春之梦的碎片

kli
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Posted: 2007-05-09 13:36:23 Post subject: 我青春之梦的碎片

我青春之梦的碎片我所有青春的梦都被那个惊雷震破它是应来、要来或是我自己唤来我青春之梦的碎片是一撒撒尖刃的小刀我所有青春的血在冬天里挥洒然后入土僵冻而如果春风不会把它唤起让它象冰融的水一样流淌或蒸发在另一次大地的震动中它将会随岩浆一起向天空复仇 _________________ 在剪梦堡寻找黄斌成 http://blog.creaders.net/LUKE/

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Posted: 2007-05-09 21:28:40 Post subject:

震荡，还是震荡。“） _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2007-05-10 21:52:41 Post subject:

“它是应来、要来或是我自己唤来我青春之梦的碎片是”——个人感觉可删。用“飞出”连接不知道“一撒撒”这个词准不准确：）后面不错！ _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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