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在路上
沙漠
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PostPosted: 2007-05-07 02:39:00    Post subject: 在路上 Reply with quote

在路上

我们无畏的目光
撑起一种时尚,比如音乐、春天、仰望
还有一片云彩触手可及

飞扬的长发
像围困狮子的栅栏
我们的锋芒几乎刺破天幕

放一支绿箭
飞入橙黄的麦地,那一柄被我们
细心擦拭的弯弓
一度美丽而矫情

谁居安思危
谁随遇而安
最初的那支绿箭
被我们喂养成鹰,飞在群鸟的前面


子夜

不需要很冷的眼
时间就凝成了水
被黑黑的岸围成一个黑黑的湖
声音断了翅
跌落在草丛,昏厥或熟睡

都是一种幸福
现在,空气温顺地
进出我的灵魂
我听到它们安静的脚步

如果现在我不幸福
如果幸福注定不在我的诗歌里
如果我和幸福之间
隔着一道黑透的时间的门

曙光很快就会到来
把这道门轻轻开启
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子花
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Joined: 08 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-05-07 03:10:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

不需要很冷的眼
时间就凝成了水
不错的句子!!学习!
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溪语
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Joined: 16 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-05-07 03:13:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

空气温顺地
进出我的灵魂
我听到它们安静的脚步
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金金
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Joined: 08 Feb 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-05-08 20:36:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

轻灵的颜色和考虑……
问好沙漠:)!比较喜欢
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阿依琼裙
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PostPosted: 2007-05-08 21:19:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

在路上


你行走的路上

尘埃喧嚣

延伸梦的距离

我的脚步

停顿

以后的季节

盛开的裙子

和阳光一样炙热
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杨海军
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Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-05-09 22:00:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

沙漠兄好诗歌!!


不需要很冷的眼
时间就凝成了水
被黑黑的岸围成一个黑黑的湖
声音断了翅
跌落在草丛,昏厥或熟睡
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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司马策风
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PostPosted: 2007-05-09 22:30:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

很喜欢《子夜》气运流畅。心理色彩转折自然。温暖人心。

问好
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-05-10 18:54:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

不需要很冷的眼
时间就凝成了水

好句, 问好
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