梦飞翁
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打油.夜战蚊子
梦飞翁
蚊闹苦难眠，夜深竟辗转。
嚓嚓抓腿脚，叭叭自搧脸。
蚊香不管用，喷药嗓子干。
拉灯怒开战，手掌血涟涟。
本性专扰民，要你拿命还！
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kokho
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| Posted: 2007-05-09 23:35:19 Post subject: |
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有趣  
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乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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梦飞翁
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| Posted: 2007-05-10 06:00:56 Post subject: |
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谢kokho雅评！
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Lake
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| Posted: 2007-05-11 07:11:16 Post subject: Re: 打油.夜战蚊子 |
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嚓嚓抓腿脚，叭叭自搧脸。
拉灯怒开战，手掌血涟涟。
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忍俊不禁 
谢谢带来的开怀大笑
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梦飞翁
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此作若能为大家带一点笑声，我意足矣！
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