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啊，朋友再见[真实生活迷你小说]

巫朝晖
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Posted: 2007-05-04 20:03:45 Post subject: 啊，朋友再见[真实生活迷你小说]

和一个墨尔本的朋友有十年没有见面了。一天，正想打个电话，此时我的电话响了——正是那位朋友！ “好久没有联系了！” “是啊！我正要给你打电话呢！”我兴奋地说。 “给你一个惊喜——明天一早我会到悉尼，我们十年没有见面了！”朋友语音带着欣喜。 “真的？那太好了！”我几乎跳起来，接着说：“我也给你一个更大的惊喜——明天一早我九点的飞机到墨尔本” …… _________________ 【投稿澳洲彩虹鹦】作者与前澳洲第一领导人约翰·霍华德先生

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Posted: 2007-05-05 02:48:59 Post subject:

好!虽然只有六句话,时间,地点,人物,故事的原因,结果...小说的几大要素俱全.拜读了.

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Posted: 2007-05-06 19:06:24 Post subject:

精悍有余味欣赏了

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Posted: 2007-05-10 04:02:35 Post subject:

他乡客 wrote:

好!虽然只有六句话,时间,地点,人物,故事的原因,结果...小说的几大要素俱全.拜读了. Smile

谢谢，还请多指点。
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巫朝晖
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Posted: 2007-05-10 04:03:25 Post subject:

一叶清风 wrote:

精悍有余味欣赏了

感谢！欢迎常来。
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Posted: 2007-05-10 08:26:07 Post subject:

憾!

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Posted: 2007-05-13 00:39:52 Post subject:

谢谢白水。 _________________ 【投稿澳洲彩虹鹦】作者与前澳洲第一领导人约翰·霍华德先生

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Posted: 2007-05-14 05:45:20 Post subject:

很有戏剧性！

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Posted: 2007-05-22 04:41:40 Post subject:

短小精悍。余味无穷。问好。 _________________ 齐喜章(智发）智发雅居http://qxzzzzz.blog.sohu.com/

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Posted: 2007-09-24 04:50:19 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

很有戏剧性！

不是戏剧，是我的亲身故事。
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Posted: 2007-09-24 04:50:46 Post subject:

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短小精悍。余味无穷。问好。

谢谢阅读。

祝中秋节快乐。
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