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四月最后一天的雨

听雨不闻风
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Joined: 16 Jan 2007
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Posted: 2007-05-10 02:01:47 Post subject: 四月最后一天的雨

四月最后一天的雨文/听雨不闻风四月最后一天的雨是下在零晨过后的风里此前窗外的月不太圆有几片云在辽侥着就算整个四月都没下雨成片成田的麦子在拔节锋芒毕露试比天高不知老天能否竞折腰雨打在遮雨蓬上作响梦的触角早被滴水声惊动院内的无花果果青叶垂远处的槐树槐花残落忆起三月曾看望着的小草一生的轮回只在于野外生生死死青青黄黄为小草拍照留影时开心的笑四月如那没有雨的日子干燥烦闷心悸脉乱曾经湿滑的诗路干裂着灵感没有单车驮着就是不出来下雨在四月的最后一天晨时两珠苏铁蓬蓬勃勃的昂着头一片垂柳随风顺雨的摇着腰八十多岁的老太太在雨中走了 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/TYBWF xzbbsoxz@sina.com

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Posted: 2007-05-10 06:14:32 Post subject:

描述稍多,可再提炼下. "锋芒毕露试比天高不知老天能否竞折腰" 个人感觉这样的语言没什么意思。问好：） _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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