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小琪的花园

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-05-10 00:52:15 Post subject: 小琪的花园

小琪的花园这首诗写给小琪和她的花园五月的中午小琪坐在花园里花园寂静芸芸花朵和草木寂静偶尔的翅膀掠过像打开的一片片小闪电挥舞刀锋小琪又坐在花园里唱歌了唱给那些水仙、草莓还有蚂蚁和小蜥蜴她说它们的爱情让她好感动一只麻雀从栅栏外飞进来落在牡丹花上像一粒石子落入水中小琪的心跟着颤了几下目光长满了游动的长丝小琪说她永远不会离开这个花园说这些的时候她流下了伤心的泪水 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-05-10 01:14:35 Post subject: 谈心

海军的诗日益成熟。驾熟就轻。但我觉得过早形成风格未必是好事。另外，注意意象的创新。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-05-10 07:26:09 Post subject:

韩少君,你有博客吧,能不能给我个地址，好去学习?!问好海军和少君两位诗人~

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-05-10 07:29:27 Post subject:

这个很令人感动好诗我把这首诗写给小琪和她的花园可以不要，或者放到最后 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

三色堇
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Posted: 2007-05-10 07:34:29 Post subject:

同意少君看法，问好朋友.

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2007-05-10 08:13:43 Post subject:

很美的花园~~ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-05-10 15:14:24 Post subject:

谢和平岛先生的赏读！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-05-10 15:15:47 Post subject:

谢少君兄和三色瑾诗人的关注与建议！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-05-10 15:16:26 Post subject:

谢半溪明月诗人！！祝好。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-05-10 15:17:47 Post subject:

谢甘肃诗人小米妹妹！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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