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立夏日
俞伟远
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PostPosted: 2007-05-09 06:55:32    Post subject: 立夏日 Reply with quote

立夏日





春天多美

她来了又去了

为会么想哭又哭不出来



今日气温达到30度

走在立夏的阳光与风里

答案会藏在哪里

怎么还有点冷







一天就过去了

夜色独特

沉默的黑

一些尖锐的声音割来割去

闪着明亮的光







室内或者面前的黑

可以用一盏台灯抹亮

腹腔的黑

由一包方便面安慰



一个疑问的黑

如何解决



现在打开啤酒瓶

猛一口一种凉一种凄美

感人

但无法指点奔波中的迷津







有疼痛继往开来

一阵又一阵此起彼伏

有被撬动和破碎的声音

沉甸甸地欲坠

2007-5-9修
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江晨
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PostPosted: 2007-05-09 08:28:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

需要提炼
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PostPosted: 2007-05-09 10:47:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜读 问好。。。


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