xctianbin
秀才
Joined: 08 Oct 2006
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 Posted: 2007-05-08 16:24:03 Post subject: 小蜜 |
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小蜜
田 斌
她使出了浑身解数
也极尽了温柔
她伸出她修长如魔的手
想挽留他归家似剑的心
来陪她即将产生的满屋子的孤独
可他刚才还耳鬓撕磨的话语
现在明显地硬了起来
他穿衣着装 顺理了一下心绪
他用他还有点人情味的手
轻抚了一下她的脸
便匆匆融入夜晚无边的黑
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韩少君
进士出身
Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
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| Posted: 2007-05-08 16:29:17 Post subject: |
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小毕竟是小，和老大没法比。
准确。感受或者揣摩很准。
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xctianbin
秀才
Joined: 08 Oct 2006
Posts: 105
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| Posted: 2007-05-08 17:04:16 Post subject: |
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| 问好少君！ |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2007-05-08 19:45:41 Post subject: |
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一把小小的手术刀, 切入一个小小的社会层面
不错的切入点 |
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赵福治
探花
Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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| Posted: 2007-05-09 01:33:03 Post subject: |
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| 关注现实的. |
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半溪明月
榜眼
Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760
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| Posted: 2007-05-09 04:46:43 Post subject: |
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| 田斌老师的题材总是很特殊~问好! |
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xctianbin
秀才
Joined: 08 Oct 2006
Posts: 105
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| Posted: 2007-05-09 18:24:00 Post subject: |
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| 问好明月！ |
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司马策风
举人
Joined: 03 Dec 2006
Posts: 1211
Location: 温哥华
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xctianbin
秀才
Joined: 08 Oct 2006
Posts: 105
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| Posted: 2007-05-09 22:40:22 Post subject: |
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| 十分感谢！ |
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