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潮湿的或干燥的…
尹士林
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PostPosted: 2006-05-27 02:00:01    Post subject: 潮湿的或干燥的… Reply with quote

潮湿的或干燥的…
----批评城市人群的冷漠麻木
河北易县中学 尹士林(邮编074200)
潮湿的城市之路
路上干燥的城市人群

潮湿的路
并没有滋润人群
他们在交错纵横的
迷宫一般的水泥丛林里
骚动不安
他们
似乎找不到方向
找不到出路

有人 在人的浪潮里
被淹没 无影无踪
有人 在人的风暴里
被撕裂 支离破碎
也有人 在人的黑夜里
被强暴 无梦无醒

于是
穿过城市浪潮时
有风暴肆虐
躲避风暴时
又在茫茫黑夜里迷失方向

当你 顺着自己的脚步声
走过去 发现
在城市空间之外
你的心
被撕碎在黑暗的城市之夜
被抛撒在潮湿的城市之路
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忧郁过、犹豫过,从未放弃过!!!!!
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PostPosted: 2006-06-24 06:02:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

学习,问好。
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乐园成也
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PostPosted: 2006-06-24 06:33:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

现实:))提给大家!
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PostPosted: 2006-06-24 14:45:43    Post subject: 提起来!问好! Reply with quote

大家读!
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PostPosted: 2006-06-24 18:01:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

当你 顺着自己的脚步声
走过去 发现
在城市空间之外
你的心
被撕碎在黑暗的城市之夜
被抛撒在潮湿的城市之路


喜欢这样的表达,问好兄弟!
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PostPosted: 2006-06-25 02:44:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜读大作真的很不错!有几天没来了.我的网页还是不正常没办法.问好!
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PostPosted: 2006-06-26 01:10:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢各位捧场!!
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