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[原创]七律.幽园闲唱
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PostPosted: 2007-05-07 23:59:26    Post subject: [原创]七律.幽园闲唱 Reply with quote
七律.幽园闲唱
　　　梦飞翁2007.5
四时交替万年同，
驱尽寒冬杨柳青。
春意日浓偷立夏，
东君益暖敞新晴。
啾啾怨鸟言巢远，
款款摇枝唱景明。
恨不喝停天地转，
宁由华发恣意生！
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PostPosted: 2007-05-08 01:49:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
沙发　来学习　　。。

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PostPosted: 2007-05-08 03:26:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
恨不喝停天地转,大气,好.
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PostPosted: 2007-05-08 06:31:48    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢雅评！多指教！
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PostPosted: 2007-05-09 14:44:34    Post subject: Reply with quote
拙作已改，请再砸！
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PostPosted: 2007-05-09 21:01:29    Post subject: Re: [原创]七律.幽园闲唱 Reply with quote
梦飞翁 wrote:
七律.幽园闲唱
　　　梦飞翁2007.5
四时交替万年同，
驱尽寒冬杨柳青。
春意日浓偷立夏，
东君益暖敞新晴。
啾啾怨鸟言巢远，
款款摇枝唱景明。
恨不喝停天地转，
宁由华发恣意生！

飞翁不愠，闲唱不闲。学习中！
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PostPosted: 2007-05-09 21:25:25    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢冰清雅评！
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