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[原创]沉醉
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PostPosted: 2007-05-07 06:40:01    Post subject: [原创]沉醉 Reply with quote

晨光,妩媚的将我从甜梦中唤醒,我记起了与风的约会;
迈着匆匆的脚步,怀着惴惴的心情,惶惶地,我奔向那传说的幸福。
走在那熟悉的林间小径,踏着坎坷的山间小路,感受着风的扶持,心情格外的清爽;那快被忘却的幸福感重又回来。山路虽崎岖,脚步儿却轻巧,我如同那奔越在山野的小鹿,在攀登那理想的路途中跳跃;
站在城市的边缘,站在这山的阴背,遥望这钢筋林立的森林,我忍不住微笑着;心情悠然的感受着风轻捋着我的发髻,轻抚着我的面颊;丛林班驳的树影为我遮蔽着骄阳,带给我丝丝清凉;我晃若回到了前世,忆起了那三生石上的约定;风轻吻着我的身体,将快乐印记在我的身体里。我多想就这么躺在风雨的怀抱里,永远长卧在这丛林里,忘记一切邪恶,一切烦恼,一切伤痛……,就让这五月的风雨和骄阳,将我埋没吧。不要让那颤栗的幸福离开,不要再回到那冷漠的城市里,不要再让我找不到你的身影,不要再让我在孤独的黑夜中遥望。
太阳终于坠下了山崖,将最后一抹余辉撒在我迷朦的眼底;我转过头去,步履匆匆的回到人海中;那一刻,我将泪水带回了钢筋森林中,将今天留在那日历中,将幸福留在了自己的传说里,沉醉……

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PostPosted: 2007-05-07 08:04:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

将幸福留在了自己的传说里,沉醉……轻快.
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PostPosted: 2007-05-07 23:10:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
将幸福留在了自己的传说里,沉醉……轻快.


支持。。。


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PostPosted: 2007-05-08 18:34:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
将幸福留在了自己的传说里,沉醉……轻快.

谢赏评,但请老师多多指点,学生先拜师了Smile)
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PostPosted: 2007-05-08 18:36:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

kokho wrote:
赵福治 wrote:
将幸福留在了自己的传说里,沉醉……轻快.


支持。。。



Smile)谢谢!
兄五一节上了"神六"吧,回到大地的感觉一定很安稳哦Smile)
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PostPosted: 2007-05-09 10:51:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

你的文字 很精神 ;))

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