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七绝－梨花

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-05-07 17:38:52 Post subject: 七绝－梨花

雀吟若雪胜红妆，清雅仙姿对众芳。人醉景幽频顾盼，赋词婉转换新腔。

晓松
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Posted: 2007-05-07 19:25:47 Post subject:

拜读，以《卜算子》作和。才写《送春》归，又见《梨花》到。清雅仙姿对众芳，最属梨花俏。俏也去争春，春也相回报。待到春阑花尽时，一任群芳笑。

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-05-07 22:23:40 Post subject:

谢谢松兄和词！卜算子－回和吟罢送春调，又唱梨花好。莲叶如云秀水飘，雀弄晨歌早。信步赏兰娇，休道三春老。明岁群芳艳若潮，酝酿仙姿妙。

kokho
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Posted: 2007-05-07 23:11:18 Post subject:

好诗　学习了。。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-05-08 00:26:07 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

好诗　

学习了。。。

。

谢谢！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-05-08 09:16:41 Post subject: 回复

楼上二位词家,一位''一任群芳笑'',一位''酝酿仙姿妙''此唱彼和真个俏! 向二位问好!

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-05-08 15:40:02 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

楼上二位词家,一位''一任群芳笑'',一位''酝酿仙姿妙''此唱彼和真个俏!
向二位问好!

黄兄过誉！闲情而已。 thanks

孙继廷
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Posted: 2007-05-09 03:47:24 Post subject:

读梨花诗方知白色最美,和一首以助兴. 春风吹雪着素妆淡到无言即真芳不与桃花争婉艳直把旧腔换新腔

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-05-09 17:06:41 Post subject:

孙继廷 wrote:

读梨花诗方知白色最美,和一首以助兴.

春风吹雪着素妆
淡到无言即真芳
不与桃花争婉艳
直把旧腔换新腔

　回　和
柔风着素透幽装，
静雅无华爱玉芳。
轻送春光夭桃落，
雪姿冰蕴步新腔。

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