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笔会即景(二首)
孙继廷
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PostPosted: 2007-05-02 05:02:35    Post subject: 笔会即景(二首) Reply with quote

2007年5月2日,有幸与四平市文学圈内朋友相聚,席间,与孙慧峰、杨海军、韩少君以及特意从北京赶回的任驰诗人斗酒,偶得两首,以记之。
    
   一、游湖  
  
  山门湖水碧如天
  春风拂面意缠绵
  子卿弄桨多飘逸
  轻舟波上载群山
   
   二、聚会  
  
  锦心绣口将何求
  千卷诗书腹内收
  今朝有情群芳会
  东风着意聚风流 
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PostPosted: 2007-05-02 10:04:14    Post subject: Re: 笔会即景(二首) Reply with quote

孙继廷 wrote:
2007年5月2日,有幸与四平市文学圈内朋友相聚,席间,与孙慧峰、杨海军、韩少君以及特意从北京赶回的任驰诗人斗酒,偶得两首,以记之。
    
   一、游湖  
  
  山门湖水碧如天
  春风拂面意缠绵
  子卿弄桨多飘逸
  轻舟波上载群山
   
   二、聚会  
  
  锦心绣口将何求
  千卷诗书腹内收
  今朝有情群芳会
  东风着意聚风流 


拜读 问好 ;)


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PostPosted: 2007-05-02 18:55:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

国内的诗人过的真是悠哉。那似我们整天为生计而奔波。羡煞人也!“轻舟波上载群山”,似有翻船之险,救护队伺候着! Razz 觉得还是"轻舟波上载群仙"安全稳妥,符合操作规程。 Laughing 问好孙继廷兄。五一节快乐!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-03 00:24:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

好个轻舟波上载群山!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-03 23:43:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

问候各位诗人们,谢各位诗人对拙作的点评!!感动中。。。。。。。
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PostPosted: 2007-05-04 20:32:27    Post subject: Re: 笔会即景(二首) Reply with quote

孙继廷 wrote:
2007年5月2日,有幸与四平市文学圈内朋友相聚,席间,与孙慧峰、杨海军、韩少君以及特意从北京赶回的任驰诗人斗酒,偶得两首,以记之。
    
   一、游湖  
  
  山门湖水碧如天
  春风拂面意缠绵
  子卿弄桨多飘逸
  轻舟波上载群山
   
   二、聚会  
  
  锦心绣口将何求
  千卷诗书腹内收
  今朝有情群芳会
  东风着意聚风流 


其乐融融!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-07 00:17:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

若与冰清共乐方为美矣
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PostPosted: 2007-05-07 05:47:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

 “轻舟波上载群山”,好句!赞赏!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-09 03:23:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

愿与翁兄轻舟共渡
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PostPosted: 2007-05-09 21:22:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

孙继廷 wrote:
若与冰清共乐方为美矣

这是最高奖赏—-金奖! 谢谢.
依韵和一首.

百年修养在心头
福善连连一叶舟
雪意芳襟鸣广宇
情怀与水同悠悠
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PostPosted: 2007-05-10 04:10:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

雪意芳襟
情怀与水
冰清水净,君当之无愧矣
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