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律诗-悉尼之蓝山(外一首)
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PostPosted: 2016-02-06 03:05:17    Post subject: 律诗-悉尼之蓝山(外一首) Reply with quote

文/梁溪散人
蓝山?顾名思义就是蓝色的山。大量的桉树散发出浓郁的油性气体,在远处望去一片
蓝色。蓝山由此得名。蓝山位于悉尼东南方向,属于新南威尔州
五律-观蓝山有感

云蒸霞蔚处,极目是蓝山。
鸣鸟侵幽谷,缆车通险关。
壑沟千尺远,瀑布万般娴。
姐妹峰齐立,眼前青靛颜。

蓝山
走在半山腰
云雾齐膝高
羊肠小道
蜿蜒盘绕
极目远眺
蓝姬妖娆
三姐妹诉说着凄美的故事
把游客的心栓牢
蓝山,游过无悔
蓝山,今生已到
注:三姐妹指三姐妹峰,在蓝山南峰。有传说。
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2016-02-06 05:03:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

散人游蓝山,一派好心情。
祝新春愉快,幸福安康!
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连南河
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PostPosted: 2016-02-07 07:44:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

新春快乐!
猴年大吉!
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PostPosted: 2016-02-07 20:13:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

“云蒸霞蔚处,极目是蓝山。”——统领全篇。以下六句则是详尽描写。再往下的自由诗堪称注解。作者以细腻的笔触,准确而艺术的表达,让读者们感到像身临其境,领略蓝山之美。好诗!
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冰清
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PostPosted: 2016-02-08 19:30:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

云蒸霞蔚处,极目是蓝山。
鸣鸟侵幽谷,缆车通险关。
壑沟千尺远,瀑布万般娴。
姐妹峰齐立,眼前青靛颜。

有声有色,情景相谐,读来让人如临其境!
曾有桉树是“抽水机”“抽肥机”一说,不知是真是假?
祝福新春吉祥安康!
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qinghongh
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PostPosted: 2016-02-09 08:30:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

正如冰清老师所言,读诗如临其景。
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