笑聊
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 Posted: 2016-02-03 02:05:50 Post subject: 西江月-观夕阳有感 |
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文/笑聊(词林正韵）
目注夕阳西下，眼中满是余晖。
尤似人生年老景，不觉垂垂昏涕。
虽道黄昏景象，柔和却也痴迷。
秋色江山无限好，醉也让人坚挚。 |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2016-02-03 14:31:56 Post subject: |
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笑聊兄写得老气横秋啊  |
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黄洋界
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| Posted: 2016-02-03 17:08:05 Post subject: |
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上阙略显低沉，下阕却转昂扬，基调好。l
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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冰清
同进士出身
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| Posted: 2016-02-03 19:42:01 Post subject: |
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虽道黄昏景象，柔和却也痴迷。
秋色江山无限好，醉也让人坚挚。
好转好结！ 
问候新春！ |
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笑聊
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| Posted: 2016-02-04 02:21:29 Post subject: |
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| qinghongh wrote: |
| 笑聊兄写得老气横秋啊 :D |
庆宏兄你好！
晚秋之时，看着夕阳，顿生垂暮之感。所谓“夕阳无限好，只是近黄昏”。但这些都是不可抗拒的自然之力，又何必纠结于心。确实有些老气横秋。 :D :D |
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笑聊
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| Posted: 2016-02-04 02:24:47 Post subject: |
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| 黄洋界 wrote: |
| 上阙略显低沉，下阕却转昂扬，基调好。l |
问候黄老！确实如您老所述。既然不可抗力，不如积极乐观一些。何况黄昏景象迷人柔和。谢谢黄老点评！ |
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笑聊
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| Posted: 2016-02-04 02:25:40 Post subject: |
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| 冰清 wrote: |
虽道黄昏景象，柔和却也痴迷。
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问候冰清老师！
谢谢老师鼓励！ |
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