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庆春泽-梅（据张先词）
笑聊
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PostPosted: 2016-01-31 20:32:20    Post subject: 庆春泽-梅（据张先词） Reply with quote
一曲庆春泽，祝福朋友们节日快乐！万事如意！

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PostPosted: 2016-02-01 03:11:09    Post subject: Reply with quote
声声倾吐 报道春回
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2016-02-01 05:05:09    Post subject: Reply with quote
春回大地，诗来笔底。
祝笑聊猴年大吉，阖家安好！
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PostPosted: 2016-02-01 08:42:08    Post subject: Reply with quote
笑聊兄新年快乐！一派吉祥庆春泽。
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PostPosted: 2016-02-01 18:36:41    Post subject: Reply with quote
“横斜乱缀花处，多少冷芳来，柔情无数 。
新意在清音，声声倾吐。
报道春回，想明日谁妒。”

如果说庆宏的【庆春泽】是豪放风格的，那笑聊兄选的是婉约风格的，清词丽句，别具风味！问候笑聊兄！
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PostPosted: 2016-02-02 02:11:48    Post subject: Reply with quote
影沉寒水 wrote:
声声倾吐 报道春回


谢谢寒水兄提读。
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PostPosted: 2016-02-02 02:13:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
黄洋界 wrote:
春回大地，诗来笔底。
祝笑聊猴年大吉，阖家安好！


问好黄老！祝猴年吉祥，阖家安康！

谢谢黄老鼓励！
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PostPosted: 2016-02-02 02:14:43    Post subject: Reply with quote
qinghongh wrote:
笑聊兄新年快乐！一派吉祥庆春泽。


祝福庆宏兄新年吉祥如意！谢谢鼓励!
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PostPosted: 2016-02-02 02:16:36    Post subject: Reply with quote
晓松 wrote:
“横斜乱缀花处，多少冷芳来，柔情无数 。
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问好晓松兄！祝福晓松兄新年快乐！
谢谢评点鼓励！
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