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七律初雪

黄洋界
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Posted: 2015-11-24 16:14:58 Post subject: 七律初雪

七律初雪昨夜无声小雪飘清晨乍见景难描草间细细浮轻羽树上层层垫粉绡信步荒原寻旧路随心老径过新桥归来忽忆朋间事诗句频传慰寂寥 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

宁家珍
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Joined: 20 May 2009
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Posted: 2015-11-25 20:11:24 Post subject:

好律，欣赏学习。老师冬安！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2015-11-26 08:28:41 Post subject:

谢家珍赏阅，即颂冬祺！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

qinghongh
榜眼

Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110

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Posted: 2015-11-26 08:37:21 Post subject:

草间细细浮轻羽树上层层垫粉绡黄老师对初雪的描写细致入微。

黄洋界
探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
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Posted: 2015-11-26 17:19:17 Post subject:

多伦多往年在11月份已满天飞雪，积雪盈野了，今年却很吝啬地下了一点，怕又是一个暖冬了。谢庆宏阅赏。问好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

宁家珍
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Posted: 2015-11-27 19:04:44 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

草间细细浮轻羽
树上层层垫粉绡
黄老师对初雪的描写细致入微。

再来欣赏佳美对句，问好黄老师和qinghongh老师。

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Location: TORONTO
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Posted: 2015-12-23 12:57:29 Post subject:

问好老师，圣诞快乐

黄洋界
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Posted: 2015-12-24 07:57:26 Post subject:

祝白水新年快乐！圣诞愉快！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

影沉寒水
举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010
Posts: 1145
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Posted: 2015-12-25 02:49:44 Post subject:

圣诞快乐！ _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

黄洋界
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Posted: 2015-12-25 13:14:54 Post subject:

谢谢！祝寒水君新年快乐！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

宁家珍
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Posted: 2015-12-26 02:13:12 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

草间细细浮轻羽
树上层层垫粉绡
黄老师对初雪的描写细致入微。

我也很喜欢这两句，问好二位老师。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2015-12-26 05:21:37 Post subject:

谢谢赏阅，即祝冬祺。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

冰清
同进士出身

Joined: 29 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2016-01-07 21:40:10 Post subject:

...... 信步荒原寻旧路随心老径过新桥归来忽忆朋间事诗句频传慰寂寥哈哈，好诗！一派欣喜之情；转折也很奇妙。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2016-01-08 14:41:20 Post subject:

谢谢鼓励评阅。你已经回你女儿家了吧？最近气温明显下降，请注意保暖。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

笑聊
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Posted: 2016-01-31 20:22:45 Post subject:

赞同冰清老师评语！问候！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2016-02-01 05:08:09 Post subject:

谢谢笑聊阅赏。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

晓松
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Joined: 26 Feb 2007
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Posted: 2016-02-01 18:44:15 Post subject:

极为欣赏黄老师这首七律，对景物观察入微，描写细致，情景交融。

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Posted: 2016-02-02 07:35:45 Post subject:

谢晓松赏阅，祝新春安好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

连南河
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Joined: 30 Aug 2008
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Posted: 2016-02-07 08:00:15 Post subject:

昨夜无声小雪飘清晨乍见景难描猴年吉祥！ _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

黄洋界
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Posted: 2016-02-07 15:52:32 Post subject:

连河回多伦多过年吧，辛苦了！祝您猴年大吉，阖家幸福安康！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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