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庆春泽 梅
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PostPosted: 2015-12-16 13:32:51    Post subject: 庆春泽 梅 Reply with quote

庆春泽 梅


飘雪风寒梅艳。
何处点朱砂,
画来谁看?
经岁岁年年,
群芳迎转。
万里关山,
寄魂赋诗叹。

江山岁月多变。
读唐宋诗篇,
豪情仍显。
浸雨雪风霜,
梅香不变。
剑胆琴心,
人生路途远。


庆春泽词谱:

中仄中平平仄(韵)。
平仄仄平平,
仄平平仄(韵)。
平仄仄平平,
中平平仄(韵)。
仄仄平平,
仄平仄平仄(韵)。

平平仄仄平仄(韵)。
平中仄平平,
中平平仄(韵)。
平仄仄平平,
平平平仄(韵)。
仄仄平中,
中平仄平仄(韵)。
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PostPosted: 2015-12-17 05:11:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

“浸雨雪风霜,
梅香不变”。
咏梅言志,欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2015-12-17 08:29:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
“浸雨雪风霜,
梅香不变”。
咏梅言志,欣赏!


谢谢黄老师雅赏!问候黄老师冬安!
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PostPosted: 2015-12-18 01:55:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

万里关山,
寄魂赋诗叹。

遥问好
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PostPosted: 2015-12-18 08:36:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

影沉寒水 wrote:
万里关山,
寄魂赋诗叹。

遥问好


谢谢寒水兄!问候冬安!
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PostPosted: 2015-12-22 04:52:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏佳美词作,问好老师。
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PostPosted: 2015-12-22 08:30:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

宁家珍 wrote:
欣赏佳美词作,问好老师。


谢谢雅赏!家珍诗友冬安!
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PostPosted: 2016-01-07 21:30:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

飘雪风寒梅艳。
何处点朱砂,
画来谁看?


起笔不凡
引人入胜啊!
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PostPosted: 2016-01-08 08:35:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
飘雪风寒梅艳。
...


谢谢冰清老师雅赏!好久不见,老师近来可好?
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PostPosted: 2016-01-31 20:26:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏庆宏兄妙笔生花!和一首《庆春泽-梅》:

半夜寒风狂舞中仄中平平仄(韵)
零落雪飘飞 平仄仄平平
月辉离去 仄平平仄 (韵 )
佳丽隐身姿 平仄仄平平
悄言如堵 中平平仄(韵)
最是销魂 仄仄平平
竟成一时主 仄平仄平仄(韵)

横斜乱缀花处 平平仄仄平仄(韵)
多少冷芳来 平中仄平平
柔情无数 中平平仄(韵)
新意在清音 平仄仄平平
声声倾吐 平平平仄(韵)
报道春回 仄仄平中
想明日谁妒 中平仄平仄(韵)
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PostPosted: 2016-02-01 08:45:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢笑聊兄和词!新年快乐!
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PostPosted: 2016-02-01 18:26:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

“江山岁月多变。读唐宋诗篇,豪情仍显。
浸雨雪风霜,梅香不变。
剑胆琴心,人生路途远。”

字里行间,透露一种豪气!赞!
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PostPosted: 2016-02-02 09:01:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松 wrote:
“江山岁月多变。读唐宋诗篇,豪情仍显。
...


谢谢晓松兄!新年快乐!
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PostPosted: 2016-02-02 17:21:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

好诗好和,赞个
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PostPosted: 2016-02-03 14:35:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 wrote:
好诗好和,赞个


谢谢白水兄!新年快乐!
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