qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2015-12-16 13:32:51 Post subject: 庆春泽 梅 |
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庆春泽 梅
飘雪风寒梅艳。
何处点朱砂,
画来谁看?
经岁岁年年,
群芳迎转。
万里关山,
寄魂赋诗叹。
江山岁月多变。
读唐宋诗篇,
豪情仍显。
浸雨雪风霜,
梅香不变。
剑胆琴心,
人生路途远。
庆春泽词谱:
中仄中平平仄(韵)。
平仄仄平平,
仄平平仄(韵)。
平仄仄平平,
中平平仄(韵)。
仄仄平平,
仄平仄平仄(韵)。
平平仄仄平仄(韵)。
平中仄平平,
中平平仄(韵)。
平仄仄平平,
平平平仄(韵)。
仄仄平中,
中平仄平仄(韵)。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2015-12-17 05:11:49 Post subject: |
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“浸雨雪风霜,
梅香不变”。
咏梅言志,欣赏! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2015-12-17 08:29:40 Post subject: |
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黄洋界 wrote: |
“浸雨雪风霜,
梅香不变”。
咏梅言志,欣赏! |
谢谢黄老师雅赏!问候黄老师冬安! |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2015-12-18 01:55:34 Post subject: |
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万里关山,
寄魂赋诗叹。
遥问好 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2015-12-18 08:36:54 Post subject: |
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影沉寒水 wrote: |
万里关山,
寄魂赋诗叹。
遥问好 |
谢谢寒水兄!问候冬安! |
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宁家珍 秀才

Joined: 20 May 2009 Posts: 470 Location: 中国黄山 宁家珍Collection |
Posted: 2015-12-22 04:52:25 Post subject: |
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欣赏佳美词作,问好老师。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2015-12-22 08:30:24 Post subject: |
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谢谢雅赏!家珍诗友冬安! |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2016-01-07 21:30:37 Post subject: |
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飘雪风寒梅艳。
何处点朱砂,
画来谁看?
起笔不凡
引人入胜啊! |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2016-01-08 08:35:21 Post subject: |
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谢谢冰清老师雅赏!好久不见,老师近来可好? |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2016-01-31 20:26:08 Post subject: |
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欣赏庆宏兄妙笔生花!和一首《庆春泽-梅》:
半夜寒风狂舞中仄中平平仄(韵)
零落雪飘飞 平仄仄平平
月辉离去 仄平平仄 (韵 )
佳丽隐身姿 平仄仄平平
悄言如堵 中平平仄(韵)
最是销魂 仄仄平平
竟成一时主 仄平仄平仄(韵)
横斜乱缀花处 平平仄仄平仄(韵)
多少冷芳来 平中仄平平
柔情无数 中平平仄(韵)
新意在清音 平仄仄平平
声声倾吐 平平平仄(韵)
报道春回 仄仄平中
想明日谁妒 中平仄平仄(韵) |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2016-02-01 08:45:48 Post subject: |
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谢谢笑聊兄和词!新年快乐! |
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晓松 举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
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Posted: 2016-02-01 18:26:36 Post subject: |
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“江山岁月多变。读唐宋诗篇,豪情仍显。
浸雨雪风霜,梅香不变。
剑胆琴心,人生路途远。”
字里行间,透露一种豪气!赞! |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2016-02-02 09:01:25 Post subject: |
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晓松 wrote: |
“江山岁月多变。读唐宋诗篇,豪情仍显。
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谢谢晓松兄!新年快乐! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2016-02-02 17:21:41 Post subject: |
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好诗好和,赞个 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2016-02-03 14:35:36 Post subject: |
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谢谢白水兄!新年快乐! |
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