小曼
童生
Joined: 05 May 2007
Posts: 8
Location: Mississauga
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 Posted: 2007-05-06 14:38:43 Post subject: 七绝－－蒲公英 |
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天涯处处缀花黄,
人去人留亦惯常.
借得东风几分力,
便随柳絮舞斜阳.
BTW, 今天又发现一个酷我网站也叫北美枫。想问问大家哪个比较厉害。 |
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hepingdao
Site Admin
Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 8106
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| Posted: 2007-05-06 15:07:54 Post subject: |
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借得东风几分力,
便随柳絮舞斜阳.
这个比较厉害
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为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2007-05-06 17:12:26 Post subject: |
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| 立意深刻。 |
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小曼
童生
Joined: 05 May 2007
Posts: 8
Location: Mississauga
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| Posted: 2007-05-06 18:14:35 Post subject: |
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| 多谢hepingdao,莹雪,还请俩位以及各位高手多砸，否则小曼无法进步。 |
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金金
进士出身
Joined: 08 Feb 2007
Posts: 2035
Location: 山东济宁
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