| 影沉寒水 举人
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2015-12-02 01:55:25    Post subject: 七律•旧日诗梦长(新韵) |   |  
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				| 七律•旧日诗梦长(新韵) 满天细雨动秋凉,又告乡思到远方。
 古渡微茫云雁影,小园幽润桂花香。
 案前诗草情犹著,柱下吟哦笔未央。
 久炙推敲因梦在,来回删改月同窗。
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 诗无涯。思在线
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		| 笑聊 探花
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2015-12-02 02:52:27    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 故有贾岛推敲典,今日寒水步前尘。  |  | 
	
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		| 黄洋界 探花
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2015-12-02 16:20:10    Post subject: |   |  
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				| “久炙推敲因梦在,来回删改月同窗”, 活脱脱一位苦吟诗人也!
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 喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰
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		| 影沉寒水 举人
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2015-12-03 02:19:16    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 两位晚上好 _________________
 诗无涯。思在线
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