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過去分詞
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PostPosted: 2015-11-26 19:58:55    Post subject: 過去分詞 Reply with quote

過去分詞

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或者十四年前開的端
十年前剪得斷
是理想與愛情的耳鳴
持續辯著分飛
終于,終止

現在想來
深邃屈折都過去事了
戀是一陣春風
由淺至深,由淡轉濃
深濃休止處
花落泥紅些


新蟬又上舊枝
一老空殼,猶聞腹語
其聲
離開進行世
進入未來世
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PostPosted: 2015-11-27 03:41:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

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或者百年之前開端
十年前剪不斷
是他鄉與故鄉的分道
豆莢持續迸裂,而
國風,塵封

現在回來
征塵針綫都過去事了
路是一陣秋風
由濃轉淡,由深至淺
鄉愁浮雲止
淺淡村丘墟


新苗又上舊坡
一老空壺,腹留刻語
其音
離開現在世
進入完成世
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游戏诗歌
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PostPosted: 2015-11-27 06:07:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

老枝生新芽的感觉
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PostPosted: 2015-11-27 16:55:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

是的。1 說事業與愛情 2 說家與國;追求雖不同,但都是離家的游子。
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PostPosted: 2015-11-29 17:33:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

来段现在进行时 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2015-12-01 03:49:42    Post subject: 現在進行式 Reply with quote

現在進行式

流水癮
落花癮
為何總在
我不在的時候

思癮 氣泡湖中生
水面下 空的存在
浮出 存在就變空
而 現在
只有乾瞪眼。ing


*小注
ing = 癮,
。= 氣泡 = 眼
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PostPosted: 2015-12-02 18:31:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

读ing Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2015-12-13 04:03:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

昔有葬花詞,竹枝詞,偶來個過去分詞,誰來現在合詞?嘻哈碎玉。
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