环陂子 童生
Joined: 12 Nov 2015 Posts: 2
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Posted: 2015-11-12 18:13:12 Post subject: 临江仙.风 |
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临江仙.风
几缕飘然浓与密,云纷云卷云舒。欲摇还坠那垂珠。高天飞絮若,侧畔似烟如。
拾砌栏杆临晚景,环空夜色萧疏。吹痕淡淡几看无。透帘凭晚月,置酒慢提壶。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2015-11-13 07:55:46 Post subject: |
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写风以抒闲情趣,欣赏。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2015-11-13 08:38:12 Post subject: |
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欢迎新诗友! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2015-11-13 16:59:47 Post subject: |
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写风不着风一字,通过云、垂珠、烟等,把风的动感刻划出来,高手一个。学习。
欢迎新诗友! |
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