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两粒磁
半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-05-05 02:30:47    Post subject: 两粒磁 Reply with quote
两粒磁

文/半溪明月

你我该是相同极性的磁
守望于南北的风
而我们怎么啦，亲爱
热刺刺地扑过去
彼此长了菱角的铁
撞击的不只是火星
还有一地的粉碎 和疼

是过去的心包裹棉糖？
你只想孤饮咖啡的苦
分离需要更强大的能量
我们却屈于前世的安排
一面修补着碎片
一面在碰撞中彼此消耗
时间将收留干瘪的骨殖

如果能够改变磁的极
我是否愿变成和你相同的磁
在看得见的距离中
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PostPosted: 2007-05-05 03:56:40    Post subject: Reply with quote
我们却屈于前世的安排
一面修补着碎片
一面在碰撞中彼此消耗

形象深刻!

或许,只有"距离"才能给出"平和"与"美丽"Smile
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PostPosted: 2007-05-05 05:27:54    Post subject: Reply with quote
做平行的铁轨 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-05-05 18:50:54    Post subject: Reply with quote
问好明月！在此相遇开心。抱下！
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PostPosted: 2007-05-05 19:51:35    Post subject: Reply with quote
一面修补着碎片
一面在碰撞中彼此消耗
时间将收留干瘪的骨殖
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PostPosted: 2007-05-05 22:01:54    Post subject: Reply with quote
诗的感觉越来越好了！！学习了！
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PostPosted: 2007-05-05 22:37:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
沙漠 wrote:
我们却屈于前世的安排
一面修补着碎片
一面在碰撞中彼此消耗

形象深刻!

或许,只有"距离"才能给出"平和"与"美丽"Smile


呵呵，对，距离可以消除一切的不美好~问好沙漠 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-05-05 22:40:02    Post subject: Reply with quote
hepingdao wrote:
做平行的铁轨 Very Happy


这是最好的状态吗？那会冷漠死的~ Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-05-05 22:50:11    Post subject: Reply with quote
天淡云闲 wrote:
问好明月！在此相遇开心。抱下！


呵呵，遇到老友了啊~拥抱！
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PostPosted: 2007-05-05 23:01:54    Post subject: Reply with quote
许蔚 wrote:
一面修补着碎片
一面在碰撞中彼此消耗
时间将收留干瘪的骨殖

问好许蔚~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-05-05 23:04:14    Post subject: Reply with quote
杨海军 wrote:
诗的感觉越来越好了！！学习了！


最后一句还要修改，但还没想好~问好海军~ Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-05-06 18:23:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
问好！
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PostPosted: 2007-05-08 02:09:02    Post subject: Reply with quote
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问好！
问好金金~ Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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