梦飞翁 秀才
Joined: 03 May 2007 Posts: 114
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Posted: 2007-05-05 09:07:06 Post subject: [原创]七绝.不寐歌 |
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七绝.不寐歌
梦飞翁2007.5.6
春逝黄昏孤雁悲,
心伤魂醉向何归?
咬牙梦醒咒千里,
傲挺倔头图晚辉 _________________ 我愿意在这里结交更多的朋友,共同切磋学问,共同得以提高。希望大家多帮助我!谢谢! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-05 20:10:26 Post subject: |
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愿你HAPPY |
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梦飞翁 秀才
Joined: 03 May 2007 Posts: 114
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Posted: 2007-05-05 21:46:40 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
愿你HAPPY |
谢谢!望指正! _________________ 我愿意在这里结交更多的朋友,共同切磋学问,共同得以提高。希望大家多帮助我!谢谢! |
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孙继廷 秀才
Joined: 21 Apr 2007 Posts: 115 Location: 吉林四平 孙继廷Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-06 03:30:30 Post subject: |
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朋友,勿悲,听我说
春暮尽处夏无悲
心伤勿饮望乡归
咬牙强驰八千里
傲挺秦关看斜辉 |
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梦飞翁 秀才
Joined: 03 May 2007 Posts: 114
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Posted: 2007-05-06 07:20:13 Post subject: |
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孙继廷 wrote: |
朋友,勿悲,听我说
春暮尽处夏无悲
心伤勿饮望乡归
咬牙强驰八千里
傲挺秦关看斜辉 |
谢谢孙继廷兄和诗鼓励! _________________ 我愿意在这里结交更多的朋友,共同切磋学问,共同得以提高。希望大家多帮助我!谢谢! |
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