| 梦飞翁 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-05-05 09:07:06    Post subject: [原创]七绝.不寐歌 |   |  
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				| 七绝.不寐歌 
 梦飞翁2007.5.6
 
 
 春逝黄昏孤雁悲,
 
 心伤魂醉向何归?
 
 咬牙梦醒咒千里,
 
 傲挺倔头图晚辉
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-05-05 20:10:26    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 愿你HAPPY |  | 
	
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		| 梦飞翁 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-05-05 21:46:40    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 白水 Moonlight wrote: |  
	  | 愿你HAPPY |  谢谢!望指正!
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		| 孙继廷 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-05-06 03:30:30    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 朋友,勿悲,听我说 
 春暮尽处夏无悲
 心伤勿饮望乡归
 咬牙强驰八千里
 傲挺秦关看斜辉
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		| 梦飞翁 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-05-06 07:20:13    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 孙继廷 wrote: |  
	  | 朋友,勿悲,听我说 
 春暮尽处夏无悲
 心伤勿饮望乡归
 咬牙强驰八千里
 傲挺秦关看斜辉
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