Oliver
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Joined: 25 Aug 2015
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 Posted: 2015-08-25 17:40:52 Post subject: 五律·夜读杜工部感怀两首 |
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十载长安客，忠君未可酬。
坦途奸佞阻，率性圣明羞。
稚子方饥死，山河复血流。
此生家国事，郁郁恨难休。
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天命逢丧乱，偏居总叹秋。
艰难能自乐，潦倒为民忧。
剩友皆仙逝，余身独棹游。
致君尧舜愿，千古使人愁。 |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2015-08-27 16:56:55 Post subject: |
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感怀二首，深深抒发了对杜甫爱国怜民的情怀敬仰之情。好律！
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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Oliver
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| Posted: 2015-08-27 21:43:21 Post subject: |
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| 黄洋界 wrote: |
| 感怀二首，深深抒发了对杜甫爱国怜民的情怀敬仰之情。好律！ |
感谢点评，还望多指教  |
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qinghongh
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Joined: 14 Oct 2007
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| Posted: 2015-08-30 16:45:10 Post subject: |
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| 心怀黎民，诗传千古 |
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Oliver
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Joined: 25 Aug 2015
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| Posted: 2015-09-02 18:27:14 Post subject: |
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| qinghongh wrote: |
| 心怀黎民，诗传千古 |
此所以为诗圣也 |
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