qinghongh
榜眼
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 Posted: 2015-06-29 15:57:37 Post subject: 《汉俳-----春夏秋冬》 |
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《汉俳-----春夏秋冬》
《春》
花开百草鲜，
青春无价惜华年，
人间天地宽。
《夏》
暑天难入眠，
沧桑世道多熬煎，
何处有青山？
《秋》
秋风鸿雁还，
登高回望故乡远，
人生多变迁。
《冬》
冰封大地寒，
铺开白雪当被眠，
留芳到永年！ |
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笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2015-06-29 16:01:54 Post subject: |
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| 寓意深刻，欣赏学习！ |
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我为诗歌狂
童生
Joined: 27 Jun 2015
Posts: 42
Location: Canada
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| Posted: 2015-06-29 16:48:58 Post subject: |
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| 好好学习。 |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2015-06-29 16:50:27 Post subject: |
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谢谢笑聊兄雅赏！我尝试着把春-夏-秋-冬四季喻写成人生少年-中年-老年-晚年。 |
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东来donglai
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Joined: 01 Jun 2015
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Location: 中国辽宁大连
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| Posted: 2015-07-01 04:35:01 Post subject: |
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向老师学习 
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思念，何必泪眼？爱长长，长过天年。 |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2015-07-01 06:04:39 Post subject: |
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| 东来donglai wrote: |
| 向老师学习 |
谢谢东来！互相学习！ |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2015-07-01 06:06:27 Post subject: |
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谢谢诗友！互相学习！ |
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