笑聊
探花
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梁溪散人
梅
凌寒独自开 平平仄仄平
争春无意冷霜陪 中平中仄仄平平
孤芳问世来 平平仄仄平
兰
幽芳空谷吟 平平仄仄平
清声优雅曲中寻 中平中仄仄平平
漫风歌舞临 平平仄仄平
竹
柔枝任雨淋 平平仄仄平
更兼乱叶被风侵 中平中仄仄平平
依然故旧心 平平仄仄平
菊
晓风沾露香 平平仄仄平
东篱月下处孤凉 中平中仄仄平平
时贫守节郎 平平仄仄平 |
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qinghongh
榜眼
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| Posted: 2015-06-28 05:04:53 Post subject: |
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| 欣赏笑聊兄佳作！ |
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我为诗歌狂
童生
Joined: 27 Jun 2015
Posts: 42
Location: Canada
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| Posted: 2015-06-28 06:36:40 Post subject: |
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| 认真学习平仄。 |
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笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2015-06-28 22:58:35 Post subject: |
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| qinghongh wrote: |
| 欣赏笑聊兄佳作！ |
谢谢庆宏兄鼓励！ |
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笑聊
探花
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| Posted: 2015-06-28 23:01:07 Post subject: |
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关于平仄问题，我已在您的帖子里简单的说了一下。什么是平仄？相信通过几个来回梳理，您会掌握。 |
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东来donglai
童生
Joined: 01 Jun 2015
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| Posted: 2015-07-17 00:40:04 Post subject: |
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东来欣赏笑聊老师佳作！赞！
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思念，何必泪眼？爱长长，长过天年。 |
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影沉寒水
举人
Joined: 16 Feb 2010
Posts: 1145
Location: 中国福建
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| Posted: 2015-07-17 00:55:33 Post subject: |
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徘句
欣赏 |
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笑聊
探花
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| Posted: 2015-07-17 02:45:07 Post subject: |
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| 东来donglai wrote: |
| 东来欣赏笑聊老师佳作！赞！ |
问好！谢谢东来老师鼓励。 |
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笑聊
探花
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| Posted: 2015-07-17 03:00:10 Post subject: |
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谢谢寒水兄鼓励！问好！ |
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