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Posted: 2015-06-22 19:43:55 Post subject: 時間忍者

時間忍者夕陽時分一隻松鼠自松樹後彈躍落地尾巴收在背後猶如背袱暗器無聲無息快步潛入我的陽臺木頭甲板的陽臺忍者，定在那裏窺視著我分秒不移待我回神它一溜烟隱去光陰的箭把我射了幾個窟窿 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2015-06-22 19:48:00 Post subject:

来去之间，松鼠就是光阴的箭 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2015-06-22 22:11:20 Post subject:

"尾巴收在背後猶如背袱暗器 "想象生动而有趣！

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Posted: 2015-06-23 13:08:27 Post subject:

待我回神它一溜烟隱去光陰的箭把我射了幾個窟窿 _________________ _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2015-06-23 20:50:27 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

待我回神
它一溜烟隱去
光陰的箭
把我射了幾個窟窿
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冲浪好。
我想我太早進入老年了。
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Posted: 2015-06-23 20:52:29 Post subject:

宝塔山人 wrote:

"尾巴收在背後猶如背袱暗器 "想象生动而有趣！

山人好。
下回你若看到靜態的松鼠，它的側面可能會像我所描繪的。
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Posted: 2015-06-23 20:56:45 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

来去之间，松鼠就是光阴的箭

可不是麽。
時間是虛的，松鼠是實的，或許反過來，
松鼠是虛的，時間是實的。
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Posted: 2015-06-29 03:47:05 Post subject:

经常看到松鼠把尾巴背在背上的样子，但是没有产生过背一个大包袱的联想，所以干逗你的联想很妙。

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Posted: 2015-07-03 09:46:17 Post subject:

宝塔山人 wrote:

经常看到松鼠把尾巴背在背上的样子，但是没有产生过背一个大包袱的联想，所以干逗你的联想很妙。

不知是寶塔之内有山人，還是山人手中托寶塔？
再次問好。 Wink

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