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笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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Posted: 2015-06-20 04:11:34 Post subject:

笑聊老师，所以我说你的句子用在反腐倡廉和打黑除恶比较合适，这里的长短可以演绎为大小高低。但是用在我谈论的事情上不合适。海蛎子老师，本来我们探讨的是炼句问题，现在你的花拳一路一路，眼花缭乱。拭目以待，你的有预谋、有步骤以及有实施的后文是什么，再来深入探讨。

海蛎子
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Joined: 01 Oct 2011
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Posted: 2015-06-20 04:25:27 Post subject:

笑聊老师，我在我的那首诗后面和这里都说完了，在此略过。现在做一个小结： 1.炼出的句子不仅要朗朗上口，还要与主题相匹配； 2.用词要准确贴实，避免晦涩

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