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复活 (古风)
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PostPosted: 2015-06-01 04:57:26    Post subject: 复活 (古风) Reply with quote

复活(古风)
此次回渝,看到自家阳台上的几盆花草已濒于死亡,其中有我多年培育者,见之,心生怜悯,且感歉疚,速浇水、松土,以求复活。
花草果然有知,不负余望,三日后,竟悄然复苏矣,余喜不自禁。
二岁无人顾 奄奄一息存
枯枝仰天叹 败叶积泪痕
燥土干裂处 花根欲断魂
急施甘露液 新绿映朝暾
殘枝复茁壮 異姿挺晨昏
物我成默契 且喜又春温
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PostPosted: 2015-06-01 07:16:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
复活(古风)
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黄老爱花草,花草也有情。
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PostPosted: 2015-06-02 00:30:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄老怜悯心,花草也知情。
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2015-06-02 01:21:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢庆宏、笑聊阅读并慰勉。
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PostPosted: 2015-06-14 15:51:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

精诚之所致,草木亦有情。新绿枝复挺,为报有情人。
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PostPosted: 2015-06-14 16:29:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

世上万物都有灵性
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PostPosted: 2015-06-20 00:42:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢晓松、白水雅评。端午节安好!
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PostPosted: 2015-06-20 02:11:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

幸亏在雾都,如果在我们这里,这几盆花草早就没了生命迹象了 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2015-06-20 04:15:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

几盆花草得以复活,除人工施救外,因雾大而空气湿润不无关系,
海蛎子的说法不无道理。
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PostPosted: 2015-06-20 04:40:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄老师,我认识一位家住武汉的姐姐。她在我们这里读大学,一个学期后,最大的变化是皮肤不那么润滑了;还有茶叶,长江流域及以南,干茶嫩滑,而北部茶叶产区如沂蒙山茶叶韧硬扎手。有关茶叶的差异,我问过茶技师,他说与空气湿度有关。我想,你的花草经两年无人浇水却得以复活,可能是相同的原因吧。主观之见,见笑 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2015-06-20 18:08:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

海蛎子穷研物理,细察人情,足见非大而化之者,故能言他人不曾言之语,写他人视而不见之形,悟他人未悟透之理。读海蛎子诗益智广闻也!
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PostPosted: 2015-06-22 00:25:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄老师,你如果了解了俺家的教育和生活的氛围,这些都不足为奇 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2015-06-22 03:37:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

由于好奇心的驱使,对你家的教育和生活氛围愿有所闻。
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PostPosted: 2015-06-22 04:33:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄老师,我的《五律》帖子里每首诗实际上都流露出俺家的教育和生活氛围,因祖上有遗训,恕我不能直言。如果用《孟子·尽心下》的话来说就是:“可欲之谓善。有诸己之谓信。充实之谓美。充实而有光辉之谓大。大而化之之谓圣,圣而不可知之之谓神”;如果用老子的《道德经》的话来说就是:“有物混成,先天地生。寂兮寥兮,独立而不改,周行而不殆,可以为天地母。吾不知其名,强字之曰道,强为之名曰大。大曰逝,逝曰远,远曰反。故道大,天大,地大,人亦大。域中有四大,而人居其一焉。人法地,地法天,天法道,道法自然” Laughing
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PostPosted: 2015-06-23 04:30:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

祖上遗训,君不直言,言外之意,道法自然 ,
如此领会,可得真传?谢君赐教,不厌其烦。
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PostPosted: 2015-06-23 05:37:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄老师,孟子的话说的是境界,老子的话说的是规则,概括为一句话就是立足于世的境界和规则。我只能说这么多了 。如有不解之处,请参阅http://www.coviews.com/viewtopic.php?t=54038&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=0 Laughing
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