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PostPosted: 2015-04-03 04:16:19    Post subject: 古体新诗 Reply with quote
古体新诗
--写诗自如

只需格律句尾韵，再加白话代文言。
既是论今又承古，又是流畅随心田。
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PostPosted: 2015-04-08 02:49:32    Post subject: 令人叹 Reply with quote
令人叹

又是流畅随心田，又是汉语论今天。
朝夕万变令人叹，遗忘功绩咱无颜。
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PostPosted: 2015-05-13 01:41:27    Post subject: 古体新诗 2 Reply with quote
古体新诗 2

古体新诗说白话，旧体古诗文言文。
当代人讲通行语，千家万户齐歌吟。
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PostPosted: 2015-05-16 19:02:44    Post subject: Reply with quote
范中乂 wrote:
古体新诗
--写诗自如

只需格律句尾韵，再加白话代文言。
既是论今又承古，又是流畅随心田。


范老先生喜欢探讨诗，我想请教一下：“格律”是什么？如何“承古”？
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PostPosted: 2015-05-24 04:28:29    Post subject: Reply with quote
晓松 wrote:
范中乂 wrote:
古体新诗
--写诗自如

只需格律句尾韵，再加白话代文言。
既是论今又承古，又是流畅随心田。


范老先生喜欢探讨诗，我想请教一下：“格律”是什么？如何“承古”？


晓松老弟：你问的这问题，网上都有很好回答。
如果你真要逼我回答，我可以转载给你看...

但我说的<古体新诗>，如何“承古”？你看看我这首诗，
用你的文化知识，是完全可以理解的。是吗？
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PostPosted: 2015-05-24 04:28:51    Post subject: Reply with quote
晓松 wrote:
范中乂 wrote:
古体新诗
--写诗自如

只需格律句尾韵，再加白话代文言。
既是论今又承古，又是流畅随心田。


范老先生喜欢探讨诗，我想请教一下：“格律”是什么？如何“承古”？


晓松老弟：你问的这问题，网上都有很好回答。
如果你真要逼我回答，我可以转载给你看...

但我说的<古体新诗>，如何“承古”？你看看我这首诗，
用你的文化知识，是完全可以理解的。是吗？
_________________
古体白话诗，自古传至今。
首首跟时代，句句贴人心。
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