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只有空才可以继续
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PostPosted: 2015-04-17 00:23:42    Post subject: 只有空才可以继续 Reply with quote

*只有空还可以继续


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在山上遇到一只忧愁的羊
其实我也是一只忧愁的羊
那只羊开始向我述说忧愁
忧愁就像喷香的米糊
喂着我六个月大的过去和今天

我饱了,一种丢魂失魄的饱
让我凭添活力,我要下山了
没有一种理直气壮的忧愁可以留下我

我靠,我是空


B

在海边遇到了一个愤怒的贝壳
他一直在喊,我空了,早已空了
我忍不住笑了,是空,还要比一比
到底谁比谁,空得深邃

我靠,好像我不是空了

海风吹不动沙粒,沙粒不空
沙粒埋葬了贝壳,贝壳真空
谁才能真正埋葬我的慷慨与吝啬
埋葬我的丑与美我的柔软与坚挺


C

我靠,我绝对是空

在闹市我遇到了既聋又哑的自己
他用内心把世界的混浊交流
我既惊又喜,我没有抱错自己

自己的口水全都自己空咽
自己的目光全都自己空洗
自己的气息全都自己空绕
似乎那千疮百孔才能继续下去
才能继续下去我的苍白与羞红


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PostPosted: 2015-04-30 19:51:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜歡這段

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在海边遇到了一个愤怒的贝壳
他一直在喊,我空了


去掉形容詞,可能更有空間。
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PostPosted: 2015-05-01 00:10:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

忧愁就像喷香的米糊 喂着我六个月大的过去和今天 在海边遇到了一个愤怒的贝壳 他一直在喊,我空了,早已空了 在闹市我遇到了既聋又哑的自己
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PostPosted: 2015-05-06 00:10:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

多谢各位
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PostPosted: 2015-05-18 22:07:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

我靠,好像我不是空了

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PostPosted: 2015-05-21 22:48:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏。
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