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诗:撕开时间
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PostPosted: 2015-03-27 22:56:46    Post subject: 诗:撕开时间 Reply with quote

诗:撕开时间
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当我撕开时间的时候
我想到很多我困惑不解的东西
比如我从哪里来的
天知道我是从哪里来的
比如我来人间之前我是什么
又比如我离开人间之后我又是什么
我在人间的标志就是我有了一个人的身体
当我离开人间的身体
我就没有我了吗
真的没有我吗
那我为什么还能来到人间
我想不通了
我把被我撕开的时间合上
不想了
这些只有天知道的问题
2015-3-28
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PostPosted: 2015-03-28 08:37:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

空間消失了, 形體就不存在.
時間不會消失, 精神可能存在.
愛因斯坦的時空一體, 是錯誤的.
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PostPosted: 2015-03-28 14:19:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
空間消失了, 形體就不存在.
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在我的思维里,没有空间这个概念。在自然本质上,也没有时间。本诗中的时间只不过是一个世俗的观念。
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PostPosted: 2015-03-28 15:05:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

人間之前後,宗教在這裡乘虛而入, 他們都會給你一套答案.
中國哲學列的氣體論延承老子, 儒道在這裡有了交集, 也會給你一套答案.
當然, 詩餘文學是不必要跟隨那一套的, 物理也無須刻意理會, 能感能問則是.
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PostPosted: 2015-03-31 03:33:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

这里纯粹是诗人的问题,但是欢迎所有的人给出答案。
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