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PostPosted: 2015-03-23 05:00:24    Post subject: 五律(50首) Reply with quote

好容易爬上来,累得我头昏脑胀,没得精神出新作,发几个旧作玩儿玩儿 Laughing

莫嫌故人少,只说酒杯深。
汇集多支曲,搓揉一个心。
无妨邻里坐,不怕那边斟。
惟恐倾盆雨,从头到脚淋。
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PostPosted: 2015-03-23 05:01:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

网上闲聊者,通称局外人。
拈词惊胆气,辨义费精神。
屏蔽有迟早,请茶无夕晨。
捏揉不由己,属性小凡民。
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PostPosted: 2015-03-23 12:57:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

热烈欢迎来自臭豆腐作坊的海蛎子归来!
“莫嫌故人少,只说酒杯深”
“拈词惊胆气,辨义费精神”
佳联叠出,读之醒脑,弦外之音,诗中不少,信手拈来,皆可称妙。
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PostPosted: 2015-03-25 18:14:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

海蛎子 wrote:
好容易爬上来,累得我头昏脑胀,没得精神出新作,发几个旧作玩儿玩儿 Laughing

莫嫌故人少,只说酒杯深。
汇集多支曲,搓揉一个心。
无妨邻里坐,不怕那边斟。
惟恐倾盆雨,从头到脚淋。


哈哈,久违了!问个好先~

故人并非少,只说巷子深。
忽闻凤笛曲,乍动田园心。
炉火频添旺,炕头小酒斟。
倾盆雨正好,田野逢甘霖。
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PostPosted: 2015-03-26 01:27:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界老师、晓松老师,二位好! Laughing
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PostPosted: 2015-03-26 01:28:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

琴案香炉静,酒杯茶碗空。
恰逢立春雨,了却打秋风。
说左微言右,论西细述东。
传闻虽类似,考释不雷同。
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PostPosted: 2015-03-26 01:29:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

家兄献厨艺,油饼恋羊汤。
灶上风吹火,屋中膻聚香。
主宾皆足味,猫狗未饥肠。
日落身携影,谁论汗满裳。
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PostPosted: 2015-03-26 01:29:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

占中皆恶逆,反水更嚣张。
争做西洋宠,嫌披北国裳。
骂娘劳什子,欺祖榨油郎。
沦落流亡后,或将身份忙。
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PostPosted: 2015-03-26 03:46:13    Post subject: 或将身份忙 Reply with quote

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占中皆恶逆,反水更嚣张。
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连一首:

或将身份忙,或又看脸色。
没有自主张,鹦鹉学舌雀。

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PostPosted: 2015-03-26 07:11:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢范中乂老师的点评。范中乂老师能够直接抓住我这首诗的议题,高人啊 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2015-03-27 02:11:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

夜雪犹存暖,晨风略遣闲。
遥吟高树鹊,散步绝尘山。
取意泉鸣处,留心犬吠间。
笑其思逐鹿,与我不相关。
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PostPosted: 2015-03-27 02:12:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

驾言风猎猎,喷沫雨滇滇。
尘土殷勤起,路人惆怅连。
明灯难得见,暗泪易成悬。
试问拿云手,尊容尚在前?
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PostPosted: 2015-03-27 02:12:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

市场无节制,污染引纷争。
虚拟鸡滴屁,实收锅底羹。
专家秋后雨,学者雪中英。
财富归私有,危机赏共赢。
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PostPosted: 2015-03-27 02:13:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

南国孕花香,巴山奉鹤觞。
千夫同试醉,万籁共夸扬。
运似江河水,名如日月光。
胸襟天地阔,福寿自然长。
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PostPosted: 2015-03-27 02:14:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

悄悄归隐室,惴惴悟新题。
风动非为树,天明不在鸡。
粗看入玄妙,细审识过迷。
陷阱多重设,方家谨慎批。
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PostPosted: 2015-03-27 05:15:44    Post subject: 再连3首 Reply with quote

海蛎子 wrote:
悄悄归隐室,惴惴悟新题。
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再连3首:

1,游戏
方家谨慎批,议题不具体。
文字游戏多,现实无增益。

2,启迪
写诗押韵好,但要有意义。
悦耳又启迪,完美又亮丽。

3,切磋
本人说实话,请无生介意。
相互多切磋,对谁都有利。

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PostPosted: 2015-03-27 15:19:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

范中乂老师,非常荣幸地通知你:“你掉进了陷阱。”谨慎,谨慎,再谨慎 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2015-03-28 02:11:06    Post subject: 不介意 Reply with quote

海蛎子 wrote:
范中乂老师,非常荣幸地通知你:“你掉进了陷阱。”谨慎,谨慎,再谨慎 Laughing


不介意

谨慎不介意,解谜更欢迎。
愚者上过当,往后变聪明。

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PostPosted: 2015-03-28 16:49:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

海蛎子洞察力强,诗思敏捷,信手拈来,皆成佳作。诸如评网上之闲聊者,讥肆意之传闻客,赏生活之厨艺,倡养生之道,揭占中之恶行,讽市场之无节.......欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2015-03-29 03:27:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

范中乂 wrote:
海蛎子 wrote:
范中乂老师,非常荣幸地通知你:“你掉进了陷阱。”谨慎,谨慎,再谨慎 Laughing


不介意

谨慎不介意,解谜更欢迎。
愚者上过当,往后变聪明。


范中乂老师,你不生气就好。汉字很好玩儿,有的时候用很浅显的文字,可以表达很深邃的道理 Laughing
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