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五律忆乙未除夕所感

东岸
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Posted: 2015-03-23 21:37:03 Post subject: 五律忆乙未除夕所感

五律忆乙未除夕所感鲁亚光冲天爆竹隆，街巷尽飞红。夫妇评春晚，爷孙对酒盅。庭中欢语溢，阶下笑声融。尧日呈祥瑞，三阳开泰功。

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Posted: 2015-03-24 03:00:51 Post subject:

欢迎新朋友！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

范中乂
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Posted: 2015-03-25 02:10:07 Post subject: 写的很好

东岸 wrote:

五律忆乙未除夕所感
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写的很好！只是...

三阳不现实，
春晚难相通。
今日呈祥瑞，
改革开放功。
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首首跟时代，句句贴人心。

东岸
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