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运气

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Posted: 2014-11-15 05:55:03 Post subject: 运气

运气那纯然是我的运气一大早拉开窗帘便看到两只松鼠在阳光亮丽的白雪上追逐嬉戏死寂了一整个冬天的后院终于又有了生气那纯然是它们的运气刚从昏睡的黑洞里爬出来便有一双闪光的眼睛在拉开的窗帘后面出现将它们的活泼天真一一捕捉下来并把它们短暂的探险寫成了一首诗发表于: 马尼拉聯合曰報[詩之葉](2014.5.14), 联合副刊(2014.11.5) _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

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Posted: 2014-11-15 15:00:55 Post subject:

生动的画面，好可爱的小松鼠

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2014-11-29 01:05:47 Post subject:

欣赏啊 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2015-02-14 00:49:24 Post subject:

可是松鼠喜不喜欢那双眼睛，喜不喜欢这诗？看来它们分走了你一半的运气啊非马先生

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Posted: 2015-02-15 07:53:57 Post subject:

歐陽里山 wrote:

可是松鼠喜不喜欢那双眼睛，喜不喜欢这诗？
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当然我们永远不可能知道松鼠的想法。但猜想只要那双眼睛不射凶光不阴暗恶毒，那首诗不太差劲或没有丝毫诗意，它们或许不会太厌恶吧。
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Posted: 2015-02-15 16:09:44 Post subject:

是啊，至少我们是善待它们的，眼睛里就是温和

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Posted: 2015-02-16 20:44:01 Post subject:

妙哉——从两面向一处写！问好先生！——羊年春节快乐！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2015-02-17 00:46:35 Post subject:

题材和抒情主人公的“运气”。学习，问候！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2015-02-17 05:50:51 Post subject:

祝大家新春愉快，健康，丰收！ _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

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Posted: 2015-03-10 23:52:57 Post subject:

我的运气：有机会看到，松鼠在雪上嬉戏的生气；松鼠的运气：不再昏睡，活泼天真受欣赏。如果把后院理解为祖籍故国，诗外诗的意境就太美了！宝塔山人祝贺飞马老兄佳作不断！

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Posted: 2015-03-10 23:53:14 Post subject:

我的运气：有机会看到，松鼠在雪上嬉戏的生气；松鼠的运气：不再昏睡，活泼天真受欣赏。如果把后院理解为祖籍故国，诗外诗的意境就太美了！宝塔山人祝贺飞马老兄佳作不断！

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Posted: 2015-03-11 05:00:43 Post subject:

宝塔山人 wrote:

我的运气：有机会看到，松鼠在雪上嬉戏的生气；松鼠的运气：不再昏睡，活泼天真受欣赏。如果把后院理解为祖籍故国，诗外诗的意境就太美了！宝塔山人祝贺飞马老兄佳作不断！

谢谢宝塔山人。我常说一首诗需要读者来完成，就是这个意思。诗的祝福！
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Posted: 2015-03-15 05:07:33 Post subject:

是你的诗本身具有一个完美的系统，给读者制造了可以寻找诗外诗的空间。凡精品诗，都具有这个系统和空间。愿得到老师教导！宝塔山人诚拜老师

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Posted: 2015-03-19 01:56:54 Post subject:

好运气。祝福~ _________________ 中国山东，女诗人

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