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鸟的黄昏和我的夜

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2015-01-04 03:09:04 Post subject: 鸟的黄昏和我的夜

鸟的黄昏和我的夜周道模我牵着校园的黄昏散步忽然，鸟叫唤树枝香樟树飘出不安的香气我悄悄靠近树丛两只画眉惊恐地翘尾跳叫好像想吓退地上的天敌哦，灌木中蹲着一只黑猫黑夜潜伏着黑色的危机我撵走了猫，鸟们渐渐安息我却夜醒脚痛，身上爆发了战争 2014-5-8 上午10：18 连山 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2015-01-04 03:42:33 Post subject:

享读，问安。祈福和平。

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Posted: 2015-01-06 04:04:52 Post subject:

歐陽里山 wrote:

享读，问安。祈福和平。

谢谢到访！春天般地问候！
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chenrunmin
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Posted: 2015-01-07 22:53:34 Post subject:

学习，顶上问好朋友. _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

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Posted: 2015-01-08 23:11:12 Post subject:

chenrunmin wrote:

学习，顶上问好朋友.

谢谢陈君的到访和鼓励！冬天里的春天问候！
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Posted: 2015-01-18 03:09:57 Post subject:

哦，灌木中蹲着一只黑猫黑夜潜伏着黑色的危机我撵走了猫，鸟们渐渐安息我却夜醒脚痛，身上爆发了战争 _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

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Posted: 2015-01-26 00:10:34 Post subject:

chenrunmin wrote:

哦，灌木中蹲着一只黑猫
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谢谢陈君再次光临和读引！
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金金
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Posted: 2015-01-26 07:22:54 Post subject:

我超喜欢第一行！！悠闲 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2015-01-26 07:23:10 Post subject:

我超喜欢第一行！！悠闲 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2015-01-26 16:38:55 Post subject:

我却夜醒脚痛，身上爆发了战争 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2015-01-30 03:32:25 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

我超喜欢第一行！！

悠闲

谢谢金金喜欢悠闲，哪天再发一首写校园的。
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游戏诗歌
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Posted: 2015-01-30 14:04:34 Post subject:

黑夜潜伏着黑色的危机佳句本诗呈现诗意的生活。第二句需要修正。猛然间，鸟的叫声急促之类的

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Posted: 2015-02-08 00:31:17 Post subject:

游戏诗歌 wrote:

黑夜潜伏着黑色的危机
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谢谢指点！春天的问候！
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