kli
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 Posted: 2007-05-03 08:06:31 Post subject: 让春天自己去灿烂吧 |
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邀请
我还迟迟不肯 进入
春天
来迎接我 越过崇山峻岭
气喘吁吁 以为
我会高兴
可如果 你不来
我也不进
让春天自己去灿烂吧
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沙漠
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| Posted: 2007-05-03 08:59:13 Post subject: |
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"邀请
我还迟迟不肯 进入"——这里不要也罢。
“可如果 你不来
我也不进
让春天自己去灿烂吧”
 表达贴切.
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nobody
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| Posted: 2007-05-03 15:15:58 Post subject: |
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让春天自己去灿烂吧
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I'm nobody! Who are you? |
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-05-03 15:37:59 Post subject: |
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让春天自己去灿烂吧
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阿依琼裙
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Joined: 09 Apr 2007
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上城
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Joined: 15 Mar 2007
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| Posted: 2007-05-04 10:46:58 Post subject: |
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怎么能不要呢?最后一句才是点睛之笔.
"让春天自己去灿烂吧"为全诗增色/
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