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《转向灯》(外一首)

韩少君
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Posted: 2014-12-06 13:56:57 Post subject: 《转向灯》(外一首)

《转向灯》(外一首) ——吉林韩少君一总想再发一次信息：我！爱！你！又总是从后向前把它删掉：！你！爱！我二你不爱的时候仅仅是一盏路灯灭了我不爱的时候是整个人间的灯都灭了三上帝派骏马来接我还让我用光亮解渴让我和狂风结为兄弟认一盏灯做母亲我离天堂就只一步众姐妹都喊我回来母亲啊我已经无法停下《看图说话》这是一本童话书我看到了一个省——东北虎省又看到了一个县——白眼狼县最后看到一个村——小绵羊村村庄、林地、草丛不时传来咩咩的叫声这些叫声都一律温软、柔和我找到的最瘦弱最胆怯的那只就是我妈妈 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

山城子
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Posted: 2014-12-06 18:09:00 Post subject:

《看图说话》这是一本童话书我看到了一个省——东北虎省又看到了一个县——白眼狼县最后看到一个村——小绵羊村村庄、林地、草丛不时传来咩咩的叫声这些叫声都一律温软、柔和我找到的最瘦弱最胆怯的那只就是我妈妈 ——深刻！深情！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

韩少君
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Posted: 2014-12-20 17:31:08 Post subject:

谢山城子先生赏读。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

金金
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Posted: 2014-12-29 00:26:00 Post subject:

浓烈的地域感真好顶上去 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

何军雄
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Posted: 2014-12-29 00:30:53 Post subject:

我找到的最瘦弱最胆怯的那只就是我妈妈拜读学习！ _________________ 我是文学路上的苦行僧，用诗歌普渡众生。博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/2086176651

韩少君
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Posted: 2015-01-09 04:51:56 Post subject:

_________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

安红红
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Posted: 2015-01-12 07:12:40 Post subject:

最后那首感人。新年好。 _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

韩少君
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Posted: 2015-02-11 04:58:31 Post subject:

谢谢各位 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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